疏影 次韵友人梅意词

梅间竹

<div style="PADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong></strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><strong></strong></p></span></span></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong></strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><strong></strong></p></span></span></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;"><span lang="EN-US"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;">倚栏问切，看苦寒蕊白，冷艳凄绝。为念当初，梦醒黄昏，玉人凝泪当折</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">。</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;">无端西北风和雨，偏瘦损、幻形销骨。但瘦时、那日何堪，红褪不招香蝶。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>终岁无心对此，向墙儿底下，自怜高洁。竹外横枝，笛里飞花，吹弄一弯新月。松梢云破惊残雪，空谷里、夜枭呜咽。对东风，遥想春来，谱入短歌三阕。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;">附原玉：疏影梅意<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;">风寒雨切，见红楼薄雪，似泪清绝。笛怨吹梅，玉蕊高寒，香魂满树难折。盈盈落瓣堪呵手，挽几缕、余香缠骨。最寂寞、却占东风，妖娆未邀蜂蝶。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>玉冢香屑未入，一痕春梦近，影薄身洁。枝上缠绵，檐角相思，商略一池花月。冰魂玉魄同怜取，任瘦损、多情风咽。折冻枝、研墨临窗，写入琴丝香阕。<span lang="EN-US"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_;"><span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p></span></span></span></div>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-2-9 11:12:38编辑过]

梅庐

写得冷艳，“竹外横枝，笛里飞花，吹弄一弯新月”唯美

艾诗人

&nbsp;&nbsp; 一向喜欢梅兄的词.欣赏了!

聽雲館主

原作和韻俱佳，好詞拜讀了！風標高潔，擊節贊賞！

梦落疏篱

婉转凄媚,多似易安风.欣赏问好了

山下诗人

典雅，读后耳边犹有清音