和处州竹鸣君

潇湘渔歌

<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;;;;;;;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;"><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;和处州竹鸣君 <span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">人生各自有春秋，何苦凌烟阁上求。淡泊无须频醉酒，歌吹未必远行舟。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">愁听松竹成高格，闲向诗书觅古俦。天地悠悠唯此大，鸡鸣时节看吴钩。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">附处州竹鸣君原玉：<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">&nbsp;</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">转眼人生六十秋，纷繁尘世欲何求。寒窗苦读时逢劫，商海扬帆浪遏舟。<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp; <p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">行本无瑕梅品格，心同止水竹为俦。回归山野得其乐，沉醉诗书消万愁。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p></span></span>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-23 19:08:36编辑过]

艾诗人

<p>淡泊无须频醉酒，歌吹未必远行舟</p><p>----好贺!</p>

处州竹鸣

谢<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#da2549">潇湘渔歌诗长和诗相赠！</font></strong>

蓝天孤鹤

劲赏和作!

梅庐

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">愁听松竹成高格，闲向诗书觅古俦。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">“愁”似乎不妥，似亦不合處州兄心境</span></p>

潇湘渔歌

谢谢四位楼长的阅评!在下一并问好了!梅社关于"愁"字用得不妥的问题,我的想法是:和人家的诗词,不一定就是全写人家的境况和心情,也会有自己的看法和自己心境的流露的.这个"愁"字,我的本意,也就是一般而论的.但是，还是要感谢社长，给我传递了处州君的一些信息。谢谢！