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发表于 2007-1-5 23:26:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">　　</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">到樵舍</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                        </font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 63pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0; tab-stops: 142.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.95pt; tab-stops: 118.5pt; mso-para-margin-left: 1.71gd;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红土丘陵杉叶少，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                        </font><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><br/></font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">白沙滩畔夕阳斜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                <br/></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">轻风一扫寒江面，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                <br/></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">漁子农夫尽回家。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                <p></p></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><p><font face="宋体">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">说明：</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">该诗仿唐诗《枫桥夜泊》的风格，写淡淡忧思，一忧红土丘陵树少，白沙滩畔草稀。环保忧患。二思</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">出差到樵舍，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">小别离家，游子惆怅；我羡慕河上漁夫，田间农子，早出晚归，拥妻教子。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><font face="宋体">樵舍：赣江西岸的小镇，离南昌市三十里<span lang="EN-US">(15</span>公里<span lang="EN-US">)</span>。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">　　小诗意在批评今天的自我放纵，浮燥喧闹。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">译《到樵舍》：<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">向红土丘陵，看树影渐少，　<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">立河畔沙滩，望落日西斜。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;忽然一阵秋风横扫江面（打个激灵），</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 眼看漁夫、农民都陆续回家（游子羡慕）。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">
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老茶坊主
发表于 2007-1-6 10:03:45 | 显示全部楼层
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觉得还是表达未尽到位

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梦落疏篱
发表于 2007-1-6 20:33:58 | 显示全部楼层
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<p>结得温馨,烟火味最可爱</p>

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发表于 2007-1-6 20:34:09 | 显示全部楼层
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<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">漁子农夫----感觉突出一个可能更突出.问好!</span>

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-7 08:51:12 | 显示全部楼层
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>艾诗人</i>在2007-1-6 20:34:09的发言：</b><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">漁子农夫----感觉突出一个可能更突出.问好!</span></div><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">艾兄，这是一种加强羡慕心情的描写，你看：打鱼的种地的都回家了，我也要回家啊！</span>

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