依韵和霍山梦鹤长律《岁末感怀》

弗庵

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">按:霍山梦鹤先生有盐韵长律&lt;岁末感怀&gt;,实难和也.无奈追讨,勉力依韵一和,见笑.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">新岁</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">老情依旧</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">在<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span>静观雾雪拂窗帘<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">如烟往事怜还恨<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>似水流年苦亦甜<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">陶令篱边唯有醉<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>放翁塞上岂无嫌<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">嚣尘可入三山路<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>乱雨难平七尺檐<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">涂墨长毫龙虎戏<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>把杯浊酒泪巾沾<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">才疏学浅能量力<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>人老诗肥不捋髯<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">道德文章秉节义<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>功名利禄耻谋钤<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">前途未必风云定<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>羞说此头花发添<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>

霍山梦鹤

平平心绪，谦谦之风。<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">道德文章秉节义<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>功名利禄耻谋钤，君子情怀。</span>

景秀

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">人老诗肥</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">前途未必风云定<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>羞说此头花发添<span lang="EN-US">
                        </span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;"><span lang="EN-US"></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;"><span lang="EN-US">皆见性情<p></p></span></span></p><p></p>

梅心竹韵

好律！我只有望洋兴叹了：（

艾诗人

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">如烟往事怜还恨<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>似水流年苦亦甜<span lang="EN-US">
                                <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">陶令篱边唯有醉<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>放翁塞上岂无嫌<span lang="EN-US">
                                <p>----好心态.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">才疏学浅能量力<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>人老诗肥不捋髯<span lang="EN-US">
                                                        <p>----君子风!</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 欣赏欣赏!</p></span></span></p><p>----君子风!</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 欣赏欣赏!</p></span></span></p><p>----好心态.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">才疏学浅能量力<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>人老诗肥不捋髯<span lang="EN-US">
                                <p>----君子风!</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 欣赏欣赏!</p></span></span></p><p>----君子风!</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 欣赏欣赏!</p>

老茶坊主

<p>自古以来的和诗,没有什么名篇佳构可言.</p><p></p>

景秀

<p>说的在理,不过有宋以来诗人们常以此为乐,除了取韵方便外,原因有二,一是人们想显示才情,二是可参考的典籍渐多尤其是辞书,好的也不能说全无,如东坡的咏杨花.说到底,快乐为上.</p>

烟雨客

均说有理，快乐至上&nbsp; ^_^

艾诗人

<p>&lt;DIV class=quote&gt;&lt;B&gt;以下是引用&lt;i&gt;景秀&lt;/i&gt;在2007-1-6 11:16:57的发言：&lt;/B&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;p&gt;说的在理,不过有宋以来诗人们常以此为乐,除了取韵方便外,原因有二,一是人们想显示才情,二是可参考的典籍渐多尤其是辞书,好的也不能说全无,如东坡的咏杨花.说到底,快乐为上.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/DIV&gt;&lt;p&gt;</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 赞成，高论！</p>

弗庵

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>景秀</i>在2007-1-6 11:16:57的发言：</b><br/><p>说的在理,不过有宋以来诗人们常以此为乐,除了取韵方便外,原因有二,一是人们想显示才情,二是可参考的典籍渐多尤其是辞书,好的也不能说全无,如东坡的咏杨花.说到底,快乐为上.</p></div><p>唱和为诗人雅兴,但毕竟多了诸多束缚,限制了思维空间.</p><p>像东坡的咏杨花,实在太少了.</p><p></p>