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发表于 2006-12-24 17:31:09 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 12:39 编辑

<h3 style="MARGIN: 13pt 0cm;"><font size="5"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">其一</span><span lang="YO" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">老船工</span><span lang="YO" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><p></p></span></font></h3><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-char-indent-count: .98; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">當年百萬渡江初,立有奇功非一項。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="YO" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-char-indent-count: .98; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">信號連珠向夜明,狂濤卷席從天降。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="YO" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-char-indent-count: .98; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">手憑舵把自揮戈,背灑星光朝進港。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="YO" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-char-indent-count: .98; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">今日和諧炮火停,弓腰出入尋常巷。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="YO" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p><h3 style="MARGIN: 13pt 0cm;"><font size="5"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">其二</span><span lang="YO" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">擔架隊</span><span lang="YO" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><p></p></span></font></h3><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-char-indent-count: .98; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">曾抬擔架進中原,炮火震山聲不止:</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="YO" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-char-indent-count: .98; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">榴彈當頭霰彈呼,後人墊腳前人跪。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="YO" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 15.7pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; 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COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></b></p>

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发表于 2006-12-24 20:24:51 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 12:39 编辑

<p>贴近生活,反映现实的作品</p>

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发表于 2006-12-24 22:03:42 | 显示全部楼层
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<p>好,有唐人咏李将军的余韵,扩展为歌行体更佳。欣赏学习了。</p><p>推一把!!!</p>

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发表于 2006-12-24 19:39:15 | 显示全部楼层
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<p>老苏有心,感动:)</p><p>向无名英雄致敬!</p>

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发表于 2006-12-25 09:22:36 | 显示全部楼层
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