[原创]调笑令·雪夜（2）

山佳

<strong><font face="Tahoma" size="4">调笑令·雪夜（2）</font></strong><font color="#000000">
                <br/></font><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><font face="Tahoma"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><strong><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><font face="Tahoma"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span class="postbody">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;飘雪，飘雪，不尽相思玉蝶。琼花银叶戏空，</span></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></font></span></strong></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></font></span></font></span><font color="#000000">
                <br/></font><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><font face="Tahoma"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><strong><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><font face="Tahoma"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font size="4"><span class="postbody"><font color="#0000ff">何时飞起冽风。风冽，风冽，吹散残云问月。</font><br/></span></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></font></span></strong></font></span></font></span></font></span></font></font></span></font></span>

潇湘渔歌

<p>次律严谨。但意象的安排有点散乱，所要表达的意思不是很明显。问好。</p>

艾诗人

<p><strong><font color="#0000ff" size="4">飘雪，飘雪，不尽相思玉蝶</font></strong></p><p><strong><font color="#0000ff" size="4">----这句总领,后面纠缠多了.供参考!</font></strong></p><p><strong><font color="#0000ff" size="4">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 问好.</font></strong></p>

山佳

<p>谢谢</p>