七律 初冬

毓秀

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">七律</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">初冬</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">风侵岭草日渐黄，信报疏梅暗沁香。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">竹撼寒霜修节度，松摇冷月傲苍茫。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">三秋过罢归何处，一叶凋零就那方。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">依树缠藤相关惜，来年绽蕾又春光。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-22 9:24:35编辑过]

弗庵

<p>嫩草可酌</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">三秋过罢归何处，一叶凋零就那方。大佳!</span></p><p>问好先生.</p>

毓秀

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>弗庵</i>在2006-12-21 16:04:24的发言：</b><br/><p>嫩草可酌</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">三秋过罢归何处，一叶凋零就那方。大佳!</span></p><p>问好先生.</p></div><p></p>谢弗庵先生检阅,"嫩"的确不妥.久见,问安!

烟雨客

<p>喜后两联，拜读了</p>

艾诗人

<p>34联精彩.欣赏!</p>

毓秀

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>烟雨客</i>在2006-12-21 16:58:21的发言：</b><br/><p>喜后两联，拜读了</p></div><p></p>谢检阅,问候烟雨客君!

毓秀

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>艾诗人</i>在2006-12-21 22:43:05的发言：</b><br/><p>34联精彩.欣赏!</p></div><p></p>谢艾诗人君检阅,问安!

云中化蝶

<p>喜欢颔联。</p><p>久不见，问好。</p>

云海

感觉结可再用力