【七律】步韵答谢千山风君

霍山梦鹤

<p>老弟，欠债不好受啊，粗粗糙糙也得还啊：</p><p align="center"><font size="3"><strong>鹏城握别未天寒，念意翻来爱倚栏，</strong></font></p><p align="center"><font size="3"><strong>遥向流霞追旧梦，痴吟落照废甘餐。</strong></font></p><p align="center"><font size="3"><strong>卑微寿诞我羞庆，真挚友情谁可弹。</strong></font></p><p align="center"><font size="3"><strong>难忘千山多秀色，随缘玉佛再相看。</strong></font></p><p><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">附：千山风《七律·步韵为邹兄贺寿</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">》</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">无为军履几多寒。商海风流巧护栏。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">律动山川襟四海，情签日月饱三餐。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">鹤斋墨宝舒豪气，梅树书香醉咏弹。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">遥祝寿星松不老，剪裁心意给兄看。</span></p><p></p>

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云海

<strong>遥向流霞追旧梦，痴吟落照废甘餐。</strong>

艾诗人

&nbsp;&nbsp; 好稳健的律,中二联读来让人感动.欣赏!

蓝天孤鹤

学习了！

梦落疏篱

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云海

为啥叫五绝呢?

梅庐

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