[原创]贺霍山梦鹤先生寿，偶来迟了，不过最后一个应该是压轴的：）

云海

<table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" width="561" border="0" style="WIDTH: 421pt; BORDER-COLLAPSE: collapse;"><colgroup><col width="561" style="WIDTH: 421pt; mso-width-source: userset; mso-width-alt: 20516;"></col><col></col></colgroup><tbody><tr height="17" style="HEIGHT: 12.75pt;"><td class="xl24" width="561" height="17" style="BORDER-RIGHT: #ece9d8; BORDER-TOP: #ece9d8; BORDER-LEFT: #ece9d8; WIDTH: 421pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #ece9d8; HEIGHT: 12.75pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: transparent;"><p>诉衷情&nbsp; 步韵贺霍山梦鹤先生寿</p><p>论坛煮酒最难忘，把盏话心长。</p></td></tr><tr height="17" style="HEIGHT: 12.75pt;"><td class="xl24" height="17" style="BORDER-RIGHT: #ece9d8; BORDER-TOP: #ece9d8; BORDER-LEFT: #ece9d8; BORDER-BOTTOM: #ece9d8; HEIGHT: 12.75pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: transparent;">扬眉各试身手，笑指处，镝声茫。</td></tr><tr height="17" style="HEIGHT: 12.75pt;"><td class="xl24" height="17" style="BORDER-RIGHT: #ece9d8; BORDER-TOP: #ece9d8; BORDER-LEFT: #ece9d8; BORDER-BOTTOM: #ece9d8; HEIGHT: 12.75pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: transparent;">情未老，意弥坚，韵流香。曲终回首，醉问仙翁，酒可倾光？</td></tr></tbody></table>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-16 23:32:26编辑过]

蓝天孤鹤

生日不能没有酒，早喝光了。[em01]

梅心竹韵

<p>曲终回首，醉问仙翁，酒可倾光？呵呵，我是饮茶，你改把酒了：）</p><p>建议：字流香可改韵流香：）</p>

霍山梦鹤

<p>謝謝先生厚礼，押轴之韵，先回一礼，七律待后作酬。</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陈岗美景赏难忘，云海最风光。如潮涌动天际，生气象，掩苍茫。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">想世故，似云扬，任收张。竹窗风起，际会今时，且醉千觞。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p><p></p>

梦落疏篱

情未老，意弥坚，字流香。[em01]

云海

谢诸君，梅版所言极是，字流香“字”那里我想了半天，感觉不尽善，怎么就没想起“韵”？！拍腿、跺脚、碰...,算了,碰头就免了