[原创]滴滴金～～秋深

擺渡

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">惊雷半夜雨方歇。</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">軒窗外、</font></span><font face="新細明體"><font size="3"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:18.0pt;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;;;">暗無月。</span></font></font><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;">病身何奈冷闺中，</span></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">伴床前燈徹。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">紅塵事事難與說。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">籬邊夢、</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">趁時節。</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn; mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt;">瘦菊年年借秋来，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">為君徐徐發。</span></font></span></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;"><p><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn; mso-bidi-font-size: 18.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;;">丙戌年秋～～摆渡</span></p></span></font></span>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-11 0:36:41编辑过]

梦落疏篱

滴滴金 是词牌吗?意不错.问好

梅庐

好词再次欣赏。身静心亦静也 ：）

天堂有鸟

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">籬邊夢、</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">趁時節。</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;">瘦菊年年借秋来，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;">為君徐徐發。--好句</span>

艾诗人

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">惊雷半夜雨方歇。</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">軒窗外、</font></span><font face="新細明體"><font size="3"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:18.0pt;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;;">暗無月。－－－深动的写意！</span></font></font></p><p><font face="新細明體"><font size="3"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:18.0pt;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;;">　　小词很不错的．问好！</span></font></font></p>

擺渡

<p>答&nbsp; 梦落先生</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">滴滴金　　蒋氏《九宫谱目》，入黄钟宫。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">滴滴金　</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">双调五十字，前后段各四句，三仄韵　</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">李遵勖</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">帝城五夜宴游歇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">残灯外</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">看残月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">都</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">人</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">犹在醉乡中</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">听更漏初彻</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">◎○◎●◎○●　⊙⊙◎　●○●　⊙⊙○◎●⊙○　●○◎○●</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">行乐已成闲话说　如春梦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">觉时节</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">大家同约探春行</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">问甚花先发　　</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">⊙◎◎⊙○◎●</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">⊙○◎　●○●　◎⊙○◎●○○　●◎○○●</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">此调以此词及晏词为正体</span></p><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #486127; FONT-FAMILY: 新細明體; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p>另&nbsp; 结句首字本應一字豆开，我未依，此乃我的這首詞不足之處！</p></span>

擺渡

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