[原创]五绝----仙人球

心语飞香

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #999999; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 26.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><font size="6"><strong><font color="#0033ff">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font><font color="#3809f7">仙人球<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #999999; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 18.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312"><font size="6"><font color="#3809f7">清心含碧水，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #999999; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 18.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312"><font size="6"><font color="#3809f7">刺甲披球身。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #999999; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 18.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><strong><font size="6"><font color="#3809f7">大漠独滴翠，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #999999; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 18.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><strong><font size="6"><font color="#3809f7">迎沙唱绿音。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></font></span></p>

梅庐

看情況，老兄用新韵？第二句“披”字，此处该用仄。有立意

烟雨客

意未新奇。律还须工整

艾诗人

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梅庐</i>在2006-11-20 9:35:03的发言：</b><br/>看情況，老兄用新韵？第二句“披”字，此处该用仄。有立意</div><p></p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 用"被"即可,同义.问好了!