登莲花山约四支韵作

梅庐

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p><font size="3">登莲花山约四支韵作</font></p><p><font size="3">饮茶时候登高约，灿烂花红意未迟。夕照骚人青石兴，清幽曲径百芳滋。<span lang="EN-US">
                                </span></font></p><p><font size="3">剪裁随意云中叶，拾得流光岁末诗。更取莲花山上景，一枝秋色一相思。<span lang="EN-US">
                                </span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">14</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">日</span></p></span>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-18 13:06:04编辑过]

云海

居然还有沙发：）<span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">剪裁随意云中叶，拾得流光岁末诗--好！</span>

梅间竹

<p><font size="5">一枝秋色寄相思。_此句也出彩!</font></p><p><font size="5">问好!</font><span lang="EN-US"><font size="5">&nbsp;</font><p></p></span></p><p></p>

云海

<font size="5">一枝秋色寄相思--好是好，有些旧了：）</font>

梅庐

问好梅兄 云海兄。“一枝秋色寄相思”是登莲花山约为作业的起句。是日，霍山梦鹤先生折柳一枝，余跟在其后，随口说“一枝秋色寄相思”，各自君笑，一路“问相思”“怕相思”，不胜枚举。这个写得有些勉强了，硬想出来的。还请各位多指教[em23]

山下诗人

拾得流光岁末诗 ：）

无意狐人

拜读！学习！也喜云中叶：）

秋叶飘零

秋中叶，云中叶，潇洒不悲观：）

梅若雪

后三联都喜欢,西西 人也蛮青春阳光哈

梅庐

问好梅君。春吟兄指教結句“一枝秋色一相思”，似更蕴藉，以为如何？