静夜思

梅庐

<p><font face="宋体" size="3"></font></p><p><font face="宋体" size="3">痴迷惟夜静，无有赠来春。许是人心大，何堪造化贫。</font></p><p><font face="宋体" size="3">秋城怜落叶，寒月恋纤尘。谁借昆仑雪，梅花候早晨。</font></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">6</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">日</span><br/>

蓝天孤鹤

秋城怜落叶，寒月恋纤尘。谁借昆仑雪，梅花候早晨。[em17]

梅庐

谢蓝天兄阅。这个和初稿的不同在第四句，原作“何妨高士贫”，后觉得似与后面有些隔阂，静夜思也就改了思路。不过这诗本身就是寓造化意的，我就是搬来出来而已。^_^

处州竹鸣

谁借昆仑雪，梅花候早晨。--梅花引领春消息。

老茶坊主

为人改人心如何?

梅庐

使得，应该好

梦落疏篱

起结两联最好看

潇湘渔歌

<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 社长是五律专家了。此作有点深奥，我的理解是作者想以梅花“赠来春”，但是，现在还不到下雪的时候，这梅花还没有开，所以想到借昆仑之雪。但是要借昆仑之雪，又想到落叶的可怜。作者的思维是丰富的，层面之多，折转之多，使诗显得更耐咀嚼。唯一不解的是，这“寒月恋纤尘”一句好像并没有进入作者的“意识流”而呈游离状态，好像纯粹是为对仗而设的。是否可以改说别的与时令变化有关的东西呢？不好意思，还望赐教。</p>

艾诗人

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梅若雪

谁借昆仑雪，梅花候早晨。好):