[原创]七律·秋日感怀

山佳

<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#000000 size=3><STRONG>七律·秋日感怀</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#000000 size=3><STRONG>――长空又送雁飞南（辘轳体）</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>一、</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>长空又送雁飞南，    友别亭中酒正酣。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>又叙同窗一二百，    方知诤友两三三。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>风摇艳叶如仙女，    霜染黄花似俊男。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>莫道前尘君鬓白，    今行一路仲秋惭。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>二、</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>仰望霜天自叙惭，    长空又送雁飞南。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>君来小聚言难尽，    友去情深意正酣。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>梦里兄迎圆十五，    厅中弟敬酒连三。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>秋风一路飘飞叶，    愿做东篱赏菊男。</STRONG></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><STRONG><FONT color=#0000ff size=3>三、</FONT></STRONG></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT color=#0000ff size=3><STRONG>沧桑砺尽好儿男，    风染霜天华发惭。</STRONG></FONT></DIV><FONT color=#0000ff><STRONG>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>秋叶回旋心恋北，    长空又送雁飞南。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>鸿传菊苑芳争艳，    夕洒枫林色正酣。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>莫道黄昏天已晚，    仁君哪有六旬三。</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>四、</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>霜染层林一二三，    晨曦坳里舞拳男。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>闲心有意秋风去，    壮志未酬情愧惭。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>岁暮难留芳落尽，    长空又送雁飞南。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>争衡几辨难分解，    切看林翁弄剑酣。  </FONT></DIV></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>五、</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>中青北社赛诗酣，    夺冠焉思居二三？</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>菊苑芳争才秀女，    枫林艳竞状元男。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>秋来落叶随风去，    岁暮闲翁赋愧惭。 </FONT></DIV>
<DIV class=articleText><FONT size=3>老骥岂能甘败北，    长空又送雁飞南。<br></FONT></DIV></FONT></DIV></STRONG></FONT>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-8-19 20:16:47编辑过]

蓝天孤鹤

先欣赏前四首了，另一首期待中！问好山佳兄！[em27]

艾诗人

   　好轱辘，欣赏了，问好！

梦落疏篱

<P>辘轳转得圆转！问好~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~</P>
<P>出发了吗？祝旅途愉快哦~~~~~~~~~</P>[em27]

山佳

哦 还没出发那   9月初吧

蓝天孤鹤

好，最后一首把擂台也写出来了！欣赏！[em27]

相思无悔

佩服，推一下

山佳

问好  谢谢

高凉

<P>这辘轳诗本来限制就大,再加上无为老哥弄了这个险韵,能步成如此不错了.</P>
<P>长空又送雁飞南,这句意虽然老了点,但却颇为有诗意.哈哈.</P>

山佳

也是 强为之