[原创]到樵舍
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:52 编辑<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"> </span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">到樵舍</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 63pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0; tab-stops: 142.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;"> </span><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.95pt; tab-stops: 118.5pt; mso-para-margin-left: 1.71gd;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">红土丘陵杉叶少，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
</font><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;"> </span><br/></font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">白沙滩畔夕阳斜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
<br/></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">轻风一扫寒江面，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
<br/></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">漁子农夫尽回家。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">
<p></p></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><p><font face="宋体"> </font></p></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">说明：</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">该诗仿唐诗《枫桥夜泊》的风格，写淡淡忧思，一忧红土丘陵树少，白沙滩畔草稀。环保忧患。二思</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">出差到樵舍，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">小别离家，游子惆怅；我羡慕河上漁夫，田间农子，早出晚归，拥妻教子。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><font face="宋体">樵舍：赣江西岸的小镇，离南昌市三十里<span lang="EN-US">(15</span>公里<span lang="EN-US">)</span>。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"> 小诗意在批评今天的自我放纵，浮燥喧闹。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">译《到樵舍》：<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">向红土丘陵，看树影渐少， <span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">立河畔沙滩，望落日西斜。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"> 忽然一阵秋风横扫江面（打个激灵），</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"> 眼看漁夫、农民都陆续回家（游子羡慕）。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">
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本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:52 编辑
觉得还是表达未尽到位
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:52 编辑
<p>结得温馨,烟火味最可爱:)</p>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:52 编辑
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">漁子农夫----感觉突出一个可能更突出.问好!</span>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:52 编辑
<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>艾诗人</i>在2007-1-6 20:34:09的发言：</b><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">漁子农夫----感觉突出一个可能更突出.问好!</span></div><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">艾兄，这是一种加强羡慕心情的描写，你看：打鱼的种地的都回家了，我也要回家啊！</span>
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