[原创]七律三首 得友人归讯喜极而赋
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:24 编辑<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">朔风吹雁应人归</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">草木凋零识翠薇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">乍念廊前丹桂尽</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">忽传域外雪花飞</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">秦关日落寒沙急</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">汉水波轻晚照晖</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">凤沼龙池谙旧曲</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">琴心早在望中依</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">最念丘山遣种蔬</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">清泉佐酒醉茅庐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">双星捧月林中有</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">九曲回肠心底无</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">荡荡池亭卿作婢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">悠悠驿旅我为奴</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">蓬莱薄暮身俱老</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">依旧春秋两地书</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">去时相送野花绯</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">来日兼程寒雪吹</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">足下诗成先寄我</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">关中路隘慢催伊</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">弹丝待解三秋恨</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">对酒拼消万里悲</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">回首南坡桃李径</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">生生笑散月之眉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><font face="Times New Roman">[</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">注</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><font face="Times New Roman">]</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">当年的知青，一起考上后，各自东西，也结束了一段姻缘，但往来并未中断。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; 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<p>此为最大的人生财富。，其二的“婢”“奴”有深意 ：）</p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:24 编辑
朋友情深！写来自然！
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:24 编辑
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">秦关日落寒沙急</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">汉水波轻晚照晖----两地相思,韵味十足.</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">荡荡池亭卿作婢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">悠悠驿旅我为奴----一婢一奴,平等相待.</span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">足下诗成先寄我</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">关中路隘慢催伊----朋友间不论先或慢心里总是有数的．</span></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">欣赏．</span></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">还有些句字不太顺，如＇应人归<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> ＇</font></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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尤其喜第二首.可推.
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精.
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<p>佳作欣赏</p>
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尤其喜第二首---同感！
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梅庐</i>在2006-12-11 22:52:19的发言：</b><br/><p>此为最大的人生财富。，其二的“婢”“奴”有深意 ：）</p></div><p></p> 梅社关注的是,当年少男少女,也算一段因缘,呵呵,,,,问好!
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>蓝天孤鹤</i>在2006-12-11 23:51:20的发言：</b><br/>朋友情深！写来自然！</div><p></p> 谢谢雅评,问好!
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