隔水问樵何处宿？

何处无竹柏

隔水问樵何处宿？

花剑诗雨

<P>隔水问樵何处宿？</P>
<P>远波含绿向舟生</P>

梦落疏篱

<P>出句：隔水问樵何处宿？[何处无竹柏]</P>
<P>对句：问云追雁哪时闲[梦落疏篱]</P>

白衣卿相

<P>出句：隔水问樵何处宿？[何处无竹柏]</P>
<P>对句：分云探月几时圆 [白衣]</P>

白衣卿相

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>梦落疏篱</I>在2005-11-7 23:32:20的发言：</B><BR>
<P>出句：隔水问樵何处宿？[何处无竹柏]</P>
<P>对句：问云追雁哪时闲[梦落疏篱]</P></DIV>
<P>上句有问字了.疏忽了吧</P>

梦落疏篱

<P>：）谢白衣法眼，重来：</P>
<P>出句：隔水问樵何处宿？[何处无竹柏]</P>
<P>对句：随吾入寺此间行。[梦落疏篱]</P>

疯癫

<P>出句：隔水问樵何处宿？[何处无竹柏]</P>
<P>对句：卧云枕月且当家。[疯癫]</P>

凌月

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<P 21.0pt? tab-stops: both; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm><FONT size=3>对句：沉鱼落雁故乡留  [凌月]</FONT></P>
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<P><FONT size=3>灌一个！</FONT></P><BR>

叶落无痕

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>凌月</I>在2005-11-9 13:23:52的发言：</B><br>
<P 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: both; tab-stops: 21.0pt?><FONT size=3>出句：隔水问樵何处宿？<FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>松柏</FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman"><FONT size=3>]</FONT> <br>
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<P 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: both; tab-stops: 21.0pt?><FONT size=3>对句：沉鱼落雁故乡留  [凌月]</FONT></P>
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<P><FONT size=3>灌一个！</FONT></P><br></DIV><br>月儿：结构不对----出句状、动、宾、补；对句？乱灌，欠扁！

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-11-9 21:13:43编辑过]

叶落无痕

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<P 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: both; tab-stops: 21.0pt?><FONT size=3>对句：卷帘邀月梦中囚[叶落无痕]</FONT></P>