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发表于 2007-1-27 18:43:21 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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发表于 2007-1-27 18:58:48 | 显示全部楼层
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最喜四结!问好孤鹤兄!

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-28 15:58:36 | 显示全部楼层
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<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#61b713">谢天风拂我兄临帖,多指正.多联系!</font></strong>

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发表于 2007-1-28 23:24:14 | 显示全部楼层
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<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 舒展流畅的四首,稳健的音韵,和谐的对句.</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 欣赏了!</p>

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-29 13:03:52 | 显示全部楼层
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谢艾诗人兄赏评!

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发表于 2007-1-29 14:12:25 | 显示全部楼层
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拜读先生大作,好!

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发表于 2007-1-29 19:58:58 | 显示全部楼层
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欣赏好诗,问好~~~~~~

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-29 23:50:46 | 显示全部楼层
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<p>谢过散人兄和梦落!向你们说声再见!我已辞所有论坛职务,手机联系啊.</p>

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