【七律】三九偶吟

霍山梦鹤

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#0033ff"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">流光指缝叹难拈，未洗春脂雪又簪。</span></strong></font></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#0033ff"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体"></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="宋体"></font></p></span></strong></font></font></p><p><font face="宋体"></font></p><p><font face="宋体"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#0033ff"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">眼底寒梅三份老，壁中明镜七成嫌。</span></strong></font></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#0033ff"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体"></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="宋体"></font></p></span></strong></font></font></p><p><font face="宋体"></font></p><p><font face="宋体"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#0033ff"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">无能额角消鱼尾，且取风花上笔尖。</span></strong></font></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font color="#0033ff"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体"></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="宋体"></font></p></span></strong></font></font></p><p><font face="宋体"></font></p><p><font face="宋体"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font color="#0033ff" size="4"><strong>偶拾惊人诗半句，心头也涌一丝甜。</strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-11 17:59:10编辑过]

枫叶如丹

<font size="4"><strong>沙发。学习邹叔好诗！</strong></font>

蓝天孤鹤

险韵,见功力!劲赏了!

艾诗人

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><strong><font color="#0033ff" size="4">无能额角消鱼尾，且取风花上笔尖。</font></strong></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><strong><font color="#0033ff" size="4">----只这两句足以读出诗人高品.学习一把!</font></strong></span></p>

无花酒

好律，尾联想起与义“书生得句胜得官”语。

诗不像诗

<p>这首基本能读懂：〕</p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font color="#0033ff" size="4"><strong>偶拾惊人诗半句，心头也涌一丝甜。　写出了做诗人的甘苦</strong></font></span></p>

蓝天孤鹤

<strong><font color="#0033ff" size="4">簪是十二侵、十三覃吧？余为十四盐。</font></strong>

苍篁

<p><font size="4">好诗,仔细学习了.</font></p>

苍篁

<p><font size="5">续貂之作&nbsp; 三九续吟</font></p><p><font size="5">逃开尘网网诗来，满满渔篮唤伴抬。</font></p><p><font size="5">七十浑忘双膝冷，犹如九岁读聊斋。</font></p>

马啼嘶嘶

<p>霍叔这首令人击赏,唯觉末句松了点.</p>