冬至日寄友人

荷心露梦

<p><font size="3">又是节临冬至时，难忘旧岁共联诗。</font></p><p><font size="3">满盘珠落人皆叹，更慕鸾皇舞玉池。</font></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-22 15:54:29编辑过]

弗庵

<p>冬至至矣,非临近也;</p><p>结句也晦涩嫌.</p>

荷心露梦

<p>谢谢先生点评。临即至矣，非近也。</p><p>结自在其意。</p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">鸾皇，即鸾与凰。皆为古代的神鸟。楚辞</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">/</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">屈原</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">/</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">离骚：“鸾皇为余先戒兮，雷师告余以未具。”文选</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">/</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">祢衡</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">/</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">鹦鹉赋：“配鸾皇而等美，焉比德于众禽。”</span></p>

梅间竹

好寄,见情!

艾诗人

<p>鸾皇----不是意思问题,是刻意了,不就是跳交谊舞么,呵呵,,,,</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 问好!</p>