题黄山飞来石（修改）

金嗣水

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">彩石飞来坐绝巅，经年冷眼看人间。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">强权争霸兴烽火，恐怖复仇惊胆寒。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">滥用资源毁生态，酿成灾难祸家园。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">斑斑血泪动天裂，可否烦劳再补填？</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-11 14:36:00编辑过]

梦落疏篱

有感慨.对句不是很工,可酌改问好~~~~~~~~~~~

艾诗人

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;">彩石飞来坐绝巅，经年冷眼看人间</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;">－－－－起联稳健而意深．后面是否牵强点．问好！</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;"></span></p>

山下诗人

有意境。结句是“再”吧？