[原创]立春愁

宜信

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 13.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">立春愁</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 76.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 13.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.5;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span>2002.2.4.<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.95pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 13.5pt; mso-para-margin-left: 1.71gd; tab-stops: 114.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">春上枝头人上楼，<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.95pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 13.5pt; mso-para-margin-left: 1.71gd; tab-stops: 114.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">拥花抱月尽风流。 <span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><br/></span>辉煌父母争先富，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.95pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 13.5pt; mso-para-margin-left: 1.71gd;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">衣饭子民何处求？<span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #075d05;"><p></p></span></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p><font face="宋体">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">说明：该诗创作于<span lang="EN-US">2002</span>年<span lang="EN-US">2</span>月<span lang="EN-US">4</span>日（当天立春）。春节将过，下岗和缺田种的人们就开始思量到何处谋生了；又有议论，一个春节下来，行贿谋生意的，跑官图升迁的送了多少多少礼。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font face="宋体">　　春天来了，富人乐春，穷人愁春，真是<span lang="EN-US">“</span>一江春水向东流<span lang="EN-US">”</span>，载不尽无业百姓几多愁？我以自己的切身体会，发出呐喊。　　　<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p>

梅庐

很现实，一年之计在于春，计划之中得走路子，唉

山色

立意好

弗庵

立意是好,意思表达不确切啊.

梦落疏篱

衣饭子民何处求?问得好,句还可再炼,子民衣饭何处求好像顺些,却不合律~~~~~~~~~~~