霍山梦鹤 发表于 2004-12-8 17:46:31

能否再详细介绍点,是否东湖东路?

楚云 发表于 2004-12-8 20:42:44

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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>楚城楚市楚街行,古道繁华抢眼明。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>西眺东湖天界水,南舟北雁伴风铃。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>(二)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>入夜千灯映水明,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>激昂最是戏台曲,唱尽繁华不了情。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>(三)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>磨山仙府傍湖临,碧水青山拥古庭。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>半日偷闲云驾驷,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(四)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>楚城楚市楚街行,才子佳人入梦情。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>北句南言情深寄,湖光山色不表心。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(五)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>逐艳追风不了情,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>南才北俊风云笔,能诉山河半点心?</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(六)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>才子佳人动我心,磨山风景欲媒情。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl24height=22><FONT face=Simsun size=2>南行北客欢声语,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(七)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>楚城楚市楚街行,入夜千灯竞繁星。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>西醉东湖垂绿柳,南鸿北雁兴离情。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(八)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>一抹残阳天际水,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>春秋古道春秋忆,不古繁华不古情。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(九)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>东湖西岸柳成荫,北客南行兴歌吟。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>一线残阳穿宇落,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(十)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>楚城楚市楚街行,嘻鲤弄波欢客心。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>醉卧城楼樽对月,红尘俗句竟无情!</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(十一)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>绿水青山欲醉情,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>城楼古旧城楼忆,万里河山万里心。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>(十二)</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>梦里书魂画里情,戏台歌舞理神明。</FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD class=xl25height=22><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>轻舟嘻桨和风曲,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR></TABLE></P>
[此贴子已经被作者于2004-12-10 21:15:22编辑过]

楚云 发表于 2004-12-11 07:48:06

北社诗词一期

<P>把上面的贴精减一下:</P><P><TABLE 153pt; BORDER-COLLAPSE: collapse" cellSpacing=0 cellPadding=0 width=204 border=0 x:str><COLGROUP><COL style="WIDTH: 153pt; mso-width-source: userset; mso-width-alt: 6528" width=204><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl24 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: transparent" width=204 height=20><FONT face=新細明體 size=2>楚城楚市楚街行</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl24 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: transparent" height=20><FONT face=新細明體 size=2></FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>(一)</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>楚城楚市楚街行,古道繁华抢眼明。</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>西眺东湖天际水,南舟北雁伴风铃。</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>(二)</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>入夜千灯映水明,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>城楼古旧城楼忆,不古繁华不古情。</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>(三)</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>春秋古道春秋吟,红尘俗句恨无情。</FONT></TD></TR><TR 15pt; mso-height-source: userset" height=20><TD class=xl25 #d4d0c8; BORDER-TOP: #d4d0c8; BORDER-LEFT: #d4d0c8; WIDTH: 153pt; BORDER-BOTTOM: #d4d0c8; HEIGHT: 15pt; BACKGROUND-COLOR: white" width=204 height=20><FONT face=Simsun size=2>醉卧城楼樽对月,楚城楚市楚街行。</FONT></TD></TR></TABLE></P>

梅庐 发表于 2004-12-11 12:37:52

<P>改旧做</P><P>楚城</P><P>远近寒风意逐开,江湖一任楚城裁。长亭延路云烟漫,矮树倾心气象来。
盆景兴将弥日暖,池鱼趣可唤春回。何须饱食余花絮,但有门前故旧栽。</P>

林宇 发表于 2004-12-12 22:46:10

多谢大家支持

弗庵 发表于 2004-12-29 15:39:39

<P 0cm 0cm 0pt"><B>林宇兄以武汉之楚城楚市为题征诗联,虽未入楚城、游楚市,然则荆楚古雄,三镇虎地;春秋代序,风水犹在。漫吟一律,难尽幽情也。</B><B><p></p></B></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">茫茫云梦起湖山<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">故国春秋夜雨寒<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">伍子出关吴楚动<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">屈原沉水古今叹<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">一江未隔神州统<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">三户能教强秦残<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">今日楚城唯闹市<p></p></P><P 0cm 0cm 0pt">繁华不见旧衣冠<p></p></P>

弗庵 发表于 2004-12-30 11:50:29

“强秦”二字出律了,改“帝业”吧。

梅庐 发表于 2005-1-10 16:43:23

也撤销
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