聆梦散稿4---(5.7月之习作)
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑<STRONG>聆梦散稿4---(5.6月之习作)<br></STRONG><P>水调歌头...假日一天<br>微雨洗幽巷，兰若愈芊绵。欹墙梅子凝翠，榴色间朱殷。<br>袅袅清风来处，解意相萦平楚，掀起碧波澜。溽暑拒无计，共我莫须悭。</P><P>弃珊枕，绾素发，着轻衫，徜徉湖畔，何时莲叶竟田田？<br>更有垂纶双叟，一任鱼游饵尽，安坐柳堤间，不种东篱菊，却效桔中仙。<br>``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````</P><P>忆旧游...次韵前尘忆西湖韵兼赠<br>念慕才亭畔，烟柳芊芊，槐锁长桥。依约苏堤下，有雪鸥掠水，兀自逍遥。<br>曲院一刹风过，翠盖向人摇。更解事汀葭，多情蒲草，屡挽归桡。<br> 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<br>鹧鸪天..次韵拭剑以答<br>谁道春光未许赊？落红犹解缀平沙。邀卿辞赋翻成曲，共我玫瑰煎做茶。<br>愁已绝，乐无涯。碧萝亦胜武陵花。一畦青韭墙边种，剪得新苗赠酒家。<br>```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>浣溪沙。。与月出东溟生日贺<br>彩蝶翩翩舞茑萝。斜阳照水泛金波。云横远岫碧嵯峨。<br>君向网中抒壮志，柳经窗畔探柔柯。画眉解意为人歌。<br>```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>夏云峰。。谨以此词纪念那些在洪水中遇难的孩子们<br>石流堆。泥沙掩，原野触目哀哉。天帝怎生薄幸，做此安排？<br>断红无迹，学舍乱，水漫长街。肠断也，双亲劫后，何计眉开？</P><P>忍看遗照屏中，把娇儿，这时魂魄相猜。风骤雨狂永夜，甚处徘徊？<br>衣单寒透，谁又肯，揽子盈怀？最恨是，中华损却，多少英才？<br>`````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>临江仙..次韵流浪的贝壳以答<br>好梦多随流浪去，拥书思绪绵绵。<br>芄兰绕径碧回环。年来愁更逞，辞赋教伊怜。</P><P>应是佛前香爇尽，方修如此因缘。<br>今生休再学逃禅。临屏依旧韵，一韵一嫣然。</P><P>````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>高阳台....次韵前尘<br>陌上尘消，庭前蝶舞，长街一片桐阴。隐隐轻雷，可怜渐远平林。 <br>倚窗目送斜阳尽，又几番，泪浥罗襟。问凉蝉，已是黄昏，动甚悲吟？ </P><P>浮烟暮蔼蓬门掩，怯青杉影乱，郁郁森森。初启银灯，又憎窥我伤心。 <br>熄伊暗夜成孤坐，算何人，能解愁深？最难禁，月色凄清，无梦堪寻。<br>`````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>庆春泽。...与我的玩具小兔夭夭<br>碧月飞霜，兰灯溢玉，绕窗几点流萤。何处琴音，恰如溪水泠泠。<br>抛书欲向南柯去，又夭夭，费尽牵萦。散青丝，刬袜寻将，拥卧桃笙。</P><P>凝眸色若胭脂染，记当时橱柜，雅态轻盈。美目流兮，料应画也难成。<br>徘徊几度终难弃，算芳心，早是相倾。问今生，惜我韶华，谁似卿卿？<br>。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。<br>满庭芳—与花溅泪生日贺<br>草底蛩吟，帘前萤舞。一庭疏月轻匀。博山初置，香雾渐氤氲。<br>问取芳辰此夕，可是绿醑满清尊？算伊定，冰肌玉骨，道韫做前身。</P><P>消魂，这雅态，姮娥见也，逊却三分。念花前溅泪，谁与温存？<br>解事熏风肯否，吹断汝，眉上愁痕。将深愿，细书尺素，吩咐与鸿鳞。<br>````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>满江红。。失窃有记<br>乍雨还晴，槐叶底，晚蝉争语。浑不解，如斯 天气，几多烦绪。<br>也拟归家车未至，恹恹倚柳频频顾。轻雷起，行客刹时间，如蜂聚。</P><P>寻一隙，颦眉伫。衣胜雪，终难护。又邻生轻薄，碧眸含怒。<br>欲付车资方省却，囊中财物飞何处？笑从此，真个晚餐风，朝餐露。<br>。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。</P><P>孤鸾..戏赠书生骨相MM<br>月华清皎。正宿鸟呢喃，帘闱风袅。看取庭中，一径碧梧深窈。<br>长宵寂寥怎渡？向屏前，细吟诗稿。满目珠玑始叹，何不相逢早。</P><P>算红尘，最是卿卿好。记偶遇潇湘，论词巧笑，纵使初相识，也教芳心绕。<br>苍天若真解意，许今生，共伊终老。更趁少年轻俊，为我纤眉扫。</P><P>````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>浣溪沙。。。赠云蕾妹妹<br>一片彤云眷夕阳。篱边谁著紫衣裳？婷婷摇曳是丁香。<br>心底千言难尽意，屏间一字未曾忘。海山纵隔又何妨？<br>````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>无题<br>身似风中絮<br>魂如断梗花<br>重云知掩月<br>未解恨相遮<br>````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>次韵晓风拂梅以赠</P><P>暗香渐次惹凝思<br>三弄梅花月上时<br>一抹一勾犹未断<br>念君偏似藕中丝. </P><P><br>抹勾皆为弹琴指法也．</P><P>````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>打油与美人生日.<br>云中遥夜独徘徊.<br>闲把新诗逐句堆.<br>偶读美人庄子赋,<br>问卿一岁生几回?<br>注。。结句乃言美人5月生日一次。如今又说生日。故有此问也。<br>。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。</P><P>余论坛看贴.值月隐生辰.临时凑字以祝<br>云中漫步时<br>喜汝正佳期<br>深愿无言诉<br>寄卿尚有诗<br>祝福月隐生日快乐。 六一快乐哦.<br>注..云中漫步.余任职之论坛也.<br>```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>浣溪沙 <br>雪染梨花柳染青。湖光斜照两分明。绕人飞絮最多情。 <br>一叶轻舟江北渡，几枝修竹小窗横。风光如许可堪凭？<br>````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>浣溪沙..与虞某人并贺为云中斑竹 <br>柳絮盈窗乳燕飞。屏间畅谈屡忘归，觉来方省日迟迟。<br>别去天涯胸臆塞，迎来明月锦心弛。云中漫步有相知。<br> <br>注,云中漫步,一论坛名.亦为吾与虞版共职之地<br>``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>浣溪沙·次韵丁函自嘲兼答<br>纵使无才亦论文．身为断梗月为魂．多愁多病问谁分？<br>拟效飞鸿遨碧落，偏如飘叶坠红尘．余生应是悟禅人．<br>```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>鹧鸪天..戏赠若枚<br>耿耿清辉夜未阑。凉风袅绕浅成眠。<br>梦中依约同携手，梦觉分明独倚栏。</P><P>催绿绮，促清欢。闲愁何计上眉端？<br>更将窗畔玫瑰撷，为汝多情点鬓边。<br>`````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>卖花声..病中感怀<br>雨罢鸟声喧.短梦惊残.未知数日病相煎.夜夜难眠衾被冷,解尽千环.</P><P>无计促欢颜.懒扫春山.强移倦体小窗前.只恐落英皆似我,不肯开帘.<br>`````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>看花回。。。断线的风筝<br>记得当年，正是杏香初散。落英犹携舞絮，渐水榭楼台，着意匀遍。<br>多情纤手，描一纸朱深翠浅。催玉竹，化得清魂，变欲天际效鸿雁。</P><P>邀碧月，依依缱绻。又谁省，欢期难算。标格还如皓雪，奈屯蹇人生，<br>怎辞凄怨？问取东风，可知韶华容易换？到何日，肯推我，返旧时航线？<br>``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>天仙子 ..与师妹傲雪生日。<br>明月娟娟依碧沼。细点沉檀烟缥缈。<br>佛前三愿祝芳辰。飞燕俏。香暗绕。老尽百花卿不老。</P><P>检点年来愁未了，几度翻成幽怨调。<br>红尘知我算应谁？唯伊到，方始笑。桐叶题诗何足道？<br>```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````<br>八声甘州...次韵文森兄兼赠</P><P>望浮云舒卷燕双飞，彤霞衬遥天。对晚风寄语，紫衣尚浅，休动微寒。<br>暗省(天涯)初遇，新赋话悲酸。也拟寻清话，欲见还难。</P><P><br>闻道缠身新病，便屏前蹀躞，费尽萦牵。向冰笺写意，独自莫倚栏。<br>算长宵，聆君金玉，纵月斜，依旧照无眠。余生但，论词唱和，容与年年。</P><P><br></P>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
<P>欣赏～～～～</P>
<P>问候！！</P>
绝迹凡尘 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
一次太多，没法细看。一首首来岂不好？
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
呵呵.荒漠君.此乃收集下帖子罢了.以免以后找起来麻烦
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
心理难受。。。
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
拍拍无剑.乖哦.到底怎么了?开心些.不要让朋友们担心啊
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
女儿心思 个中滋味.......
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
多在細處下下功夫，仔細打磨些釣，挽，渡的技巧，他日在詞上可成大器。
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 18:01 编辑
欣赏：）
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