宜信 发表于 2007-2-4 10:25:05

[原创]读小山《五律　水仙花》

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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.85pt; TEXT-INDENT: 13.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 1.7gd; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">读小山《五律　水仙花》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.85pt; TEXT-INDENT: 13.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 1.7gd; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>2006.6.20.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 1.7gd; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 150.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">水濯东风暖，仙台玉碟清。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 1.7gd; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">馨香浮陋室，姿色动人心。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 1.7gd; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">无土根侵石，有津叶为林。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 17.85pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 1.7gd; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">花容七日短，月貌来年新。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">注：用新韵《十三辙》， “清”“庚东”辙，“心林新”“人勤”辙按韵谱规定“人勤”与“庚东”辙可通用。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">濯</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">(zhuo</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">上声<span lang="EN-US">)</span>洗；</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">濯濯：肥而光亮的样子。</span>

梦落疏篱 发表于 2007-2-4 16:17:52

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末句三平了:)

艾诗人 发表于 2007-2-5 20:50:12

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<p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 中两联写的形象生动,三平尾是得凿下.</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 问好!</p>

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