迎春（修改）
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 10:46 编辑<div style="PADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><strong></strong></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p><strong></strong></p></span></p><p><strong></strong></p><p></p><p><strong></strong></p><p><strong></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">也无飞雪也无霜，老树枝头叶浅黄。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">宵梦严寒邀伙伴，泥炉温酒话炎凉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">今兮浊浪纷尘处，往矣青山绿水乡。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">滚滚春雷九天动，莫教兴业再荒唐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"></span></p></div>
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本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 10:46 编辑
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">也无飞雪也无霜，毕竟冬来枝叶黄。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"> =====冬来,可酌,本意应是冬将尽之意?<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">宵梦严寒邀伙伴，泥炉温酒话炎凉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"> =====话炎凉,初看起来用于迎春似不是最佳选项,实则为尾联蓄势<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">今兮浊浪纷尘处，往矣青山绿水乡。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">春雷犹自九天动，莫教兴业再荒唐。====犹自,如为 已自 会不会更切题?赏末句!</span></p>
同梦落。“<font size="5">莫教兴业再荒唐</font>”，是如此 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 10:46 编辑
谢谢各位方家评帖。我本意是想对今年暖冬发一点议论，无奈功力不够，说不到点子上去。首联试点出暖冬，次联是梦回过去的寒冬，第三联是说人类活动破坏环境，尾联是对未来的希望。希望新的春天到来，回到迎春题目。再请各位批评。
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 10:46 编辑
<p>这题实在难能也,一般情景一般诗.</p><p>金兄欲突破,吾辈共资之.</p>
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