一痕淡月 发表于 2007-1-25 12:10:13

喝火令 遭遇那人

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: blue;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">乍见无从说，时空隔几年？可劳魂梦久留连？同泛江湖烟水，同数落花天？</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">腕底余温在，人随世境迁。可怜长夜不成眠。想起从前，想起两缠绵。</span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">想起一窗残影，此痛怎堪言？</span><br/>
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梦落疏篱 发表于 2007-1-25 21:45:28

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可怜长夜不成眠。想起从前，想起两缠绵。<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;">想起一窗残影，此刻怎堪言？</span>

一痕淡月 发表于 2007-1-28 14:34:01

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请多提意见:)

潇湘渔歌 发表于 2007-1-26 19:15:43

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这是遭遇了古词人吧？好词。推一个。

艾诗人 发表于 2007-1-26 21:54:04

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&nbsp;&nbsp; 角度,构思很巧,词味浓.欣赏了!

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