秋水孤帆 发表于 2007-1-23 14:45:20

临江仙.题梅花图

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<p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 27.95pt; TEXT-INDENT: 144pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><font color="#ff0066">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 临江仙<span lang="EN-US">.</span>题梅花图<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 27.95pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><font color="#ff0066">玉骨笑寒昂首，冰清戏暖抒枝。东风无力怨春迟。与梨花共醉，可否合时宜？<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 27.95pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><font color="#ff0066">日里常挥香墨，世间总有繁枝。红唇点点为君痴。逊三分白雪，赢得赞梅诗。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 27.95pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p><font face="宋体" color="#ff0066">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent2" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 27.95pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p><font face="宋体" color="#ff0066">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p>

秋水孤帆 发表于 2007-1-23 14:49:53

忆童趣

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 154pt; mso-char-indent-count: 11.0; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font color="#f70938">&nbsp;忆童趣<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 168pt; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><font color="#b38a4d"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">(</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一<span lang="EN-US">)<p></p></span></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 70pt; mso-char-indent-count: 5.0; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#b38a4d">墙缝柴堆守五更，烛光孤影觅蛐声。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 70pt; mso-char-indent-count: 5.0; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#b38a4d">而今每拾童年趣，竞在泥陶罐里行。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 168pt; mso-char-indent-count: 12.0; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><font color="#6f916f"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">(</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">二<span lang="EN-US">)<p></p></span></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 69.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.66gd; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><font color="#6f916f">陡觉江寒日渐斜， 春融冰雪忘归家。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><font color="#6f916f">顽童且喜天将暖， 结伴闲时钓水虾。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 69.95pt; TEXT-INDENT: 98pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0; mso-para-margin-left: 6.66gd; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><font color="#916f83"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">(</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">三<span lang="EN-US">)<p></p></span></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 69.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.66gd; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><font color="#916f83">雪团飞舞少儿郎， 树下房前辟战场。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 69.95pt; mso-para-margin-left: 6.66gd; tab-stops: 288.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><font color="#916f83">胡子官兵今可在？ 已然白发各他乡。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p>

艾诗人 发表于 2007-1-23 20:31:12

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&nbsp; 词喜欢下片,三绝的一最富童趣.欣赏!

梅庐 发表于 2007-1-24 09:21:15

喜问句，其余似嫌熟语

聽雲館主 发表于 2007-1-24 10:46:30

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<p>也来一个临江仙 次韵友人赋梨花的</p><p>---------------------------------------------------------</p><p>群玉山头谁得见，相思越样芳容。<br/>蓦然回首雨烟中。<br/>倚楼寒翠袖，春意似愁浓。</p><p>雪色月光明白共，晓窗揽镜妆慵。<br/>一池清碧潋东风。<br/>湔裙曾有约，归梦莫匆匆。</p>

山下诗人 发表于 2007-1-24 10:52:18

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<p>這裏百花爭艶呢，欣賞</p>

孤砚生冰 发表于 2007-1-24 17:25:40

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欣赏！

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