金缕曲 闻阿旺壮语有感而赋并赠之
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:29 编辑<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">金缕曲</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">闻阿旺壮语有感而赋并赠之</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">昨日过诗坛少侠吴根旺处,茶叙酒聚之际,闻彼之壮语欲振当今诗坛萎靡于既倾,良有感也。既嘉其志之壮也,更悲夫诗词于今之尴尬地位也,乃拟陈子昂《登幽州台歌》之诗意,敷衍一阕壮词以赠之。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">把酒豪情发,似登台、苍茫百感,眼空无物。汉月唐风消歇后,此地重归沉寂。剩几处、残碑断碣。诗国泱泱岂无继,叹吟坛谁奋陈王钺。两京复,大旗猎。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">江山代有骚人出,目季子、峥嵘头角,轩昂眉骨。顾盼早生虎虎气,掷地金声玉裂。趁逸兴、九天揽月。陶令未甘东篱老,算少年猛志常如铁。分手际,风忽烈。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p></span>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:30 编辑
<p>有陈检讨痕迹…………</p>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 11:30 编辑
<p> 我到以为,古诗词正在复苏,且有推陈出新的迹象.如果循着老路走,肯定走不通,更难得超越古人,唯寄希望于新理念,新气象,新现时,当为正途.</p><p> 个人感觉,不定对.</p><p> 词写的大气.</p><p> 问好!</p>
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