金嗣水 发表于 2007-1-13 14:48:42

步韵和时雨《冬至》

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">朔风裹雪撒江天，把酒迎春开绮筵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">斗鬼批牛伤往事，扶贫济困仗时贤。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">冰消湖上涟漪闪，劫后长川草色娟。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一曲轻歌辞旧岁，余音缭绕入新年。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p>

蓝天孤鹤 发表于 2007-1-13 19:17:53

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个人最喜结联！

诗不像诗 发表于 2007-1-13 20:42:38

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<p>有点抑扬顿挫的意思。</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">斗鬼批牛伤往事，扶贫济困仗时贤。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">看来楼主也是饱经风霜呢</span></p>

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