苏莱曼 发表于 2007-1-5 23:55:30

入声七律 赠诗友秘长清

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<div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#000000" size="4">今子知非余不惑，冰心直若量天尺。</font></span></div><div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#000000" size="4">只缘顽性累孤灯，安得神阳通六脉。</font></span></div><div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#000000" size="4">书里空传太白杯，琴头总挂歧王宅。</font></span></div><div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#000000" size="4">岂须抑泪念胡尘，沧海连波任开拆。</font></span></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4"><font color="#000000">尝得“知非”、“不惑”句，欲呈德高学长，且</font><font color="#000000">“<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">今子知非余不惑”一出不忍转平声韵以慢我激吟，今奉网内白果兄提倡之“仄韵七律”，乃敢斗胆以此调为唱。敬以此呈秘长清长者。</span></font></font></span></div><br/>

老茶坊主 发表于 2007-1-6 10:00:20

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古意茫茫然.

艾诗人 发表于 2007-1-6 20:31:35

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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font color="#000000" size="4">岂须抑泪念胡尘，沧海连波任开拆</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font color="#000000" size="4">----欣赏!仄律难度大,况入声韵.</font></span></p>

梦落疏篱 发表于 2007-1-6 22:00:49

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<div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font color="#000000" size="4">岂须抑泪念胡尘，沧海连波任开拆。</font></span></div>

苏莱曼 发表于 2007-1-7 20:42:45

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多谢谬赏！

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