金嗣水 发表于 2006-12-29 09:05:50

岁末杂咏

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">飞鸿爪印雪泥寒，世事纷纷如是观。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">白眼时人多势利，碧湖秋水不私偏。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">长郊漫步清风爽，斗室闲吟心路宽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">故友渐疏情尚在，绵绵往事梦中牵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p>

艾诗人 发表于 2006-12-29 13:50:18

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<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 颈联拓的很宽,舒展,欣赏.结联以情语收在情理中.</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 个人以为七句有故友,表示发生过的旧事,八句往事可换.愚见供参考.</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 问好!</p>

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-12-29 16:20:22

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma;">长郊漫步清风爽，斗室闲吟心路宽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma;"> 好联,喜欢~~~~~~~~~~~~<p>首句也觉冗了:)</p></span></p><p>首句也觉冗了:)</p>

梅庐 发表于 2006-12-29 19:06:53

附议。身沐清风，心路渐宽呢

鄱湖渔歌 发表于 2006-12-29 19:15:47

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<span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">故友渐疏情尚在，绵绵往事梦中牵。</span>

霍山梦鹤 发表于 2006-12-30 00:56:08

<p>見性情。</p><p>祝新年快樂！</p>

梅心竹韵 发表于 2006-12-30 09:07:22

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma;">长郊漫步清风爽，斗室闲吟心路宽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: tahoma;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 20pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman';">故友渐疏情尚在，绵绵往事梦中牵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;">
                        <p>好！问候：）</p></span></p><p>好！问候：）</p>

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