七律 吟蟹
<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">七律</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">吟蟹</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">金戈铁甲脚修长，肚量宽容貌不扬。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">饮尽三江千里水，走过四海五湖乡。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">安于穴府清心性，懒作凡尘苦恼伤。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">枫落烟波躬鞠就，脂红质玉味留香。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 12:44 编辑前面大好呢,后面如能转出深意更佳.
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<p>白描细致.</p><p><span><strong>吟蟹生动.</strong></span></p><p><span><strong>末句要出彩.</strong></span></p>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 12:44 编辑
<font size="5">脂红质玉味留香。==豪门玉手味留香。</font>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 12:44 编辑
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<p>毓秀兄好雅兴。吟来形象生动，<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="3">敢趟江湖污浊水，能居洞窟烂糟房。品之口舌留香。偶也附庸风雅一下：</font></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 240%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">用毓秀八阳韵也咏蟹</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 240%;"><p></p></span></h1><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">莫言无血亦无肠，执锐披坚气自刚。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">敢趟江湖污浊水，能居洞窟烂糟房。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">横行只应风波险，侧目缘由道路脏。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">蹈火赴汤心坦荡，留于世上一分香。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></p></p></span></span><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"></span></p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 12:44 编辑
<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><font size="3"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">七律</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">吟蟹</span></b></font><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font size="3">
</font><p><font size="3"></font></p></span></b></p><p><font size="3"></font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"> </font><font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">金戈铁甲脚修长，肚量宽容貌不扬。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
</span></font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"> </font><font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">金戈铁甲脚修长，肚量宽容貌不扬。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
</span></font></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span><font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">饮尽三江千里水，走过四海五湖乡。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
</span></font></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span><font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">安于穴府清心性，懒作凡尘苦恼伤。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
</span></font></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">枫落烟波躬鞠就，脂红质玉味留香。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;"><font size="3"> </font><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 240%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">用毓秀八阳韵也咏蟹</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 240%;"><font size="3">
</font><p></p></span></h1><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">莫言无血亦无肠，执锐披坚气自刚。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">敢趟江湖污浊水，能居洞窟烂糟房。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">横行只应风波险，侧目缘由道路脏。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">蹈火赴汤心坦荡，留于世上一分香。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3"> 各俱风味,欣赏!</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span></p><p></p></span></span></span></p><h1 style="MARGIN: 17pt 0cm 16.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 240%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">用毓秀八阳韵也咏蟹</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 240%;"><font size="3">
</font><p></p></span></h1><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">莫言无血亦无肠，执锐披坚气自刚。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">敢趟江湖污浊水，能居洞窟烂糟房。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">横行只应风波险，侧目缘由道路脏。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3">蹈火赴汤心坦荡，留于世上一分香。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 5.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -5.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: -.5;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font size="3"> 各俱风味,欣赏!</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span></p><p></p>
<p>得咏味，喜，前番我的五言只是游戏了^_^ 惭愧</p>
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