[原创]雁字横秋一绝笔
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<p>出句：<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;">雁字横秋一绝笔 [梨花]</span>
</font></p><p>对句：枫花返树万丹心 [寻天]</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -21.25pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 21.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><font size="3">出句：</font></span></font></span></span><span style="COLOR: teal; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">雁字横秋一绝笔</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><font face="Times New Roman"> [</font></span><span style="COLOR: teal; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">梨花</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><font face="Times New Roman">]</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -21.25pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 21.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><font face="Times New Roman">对句：</font></span><span style="COLOR: teal; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">游园惊梦两真情［盈盈］</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><p></p></span></p>
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<p>出句：<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;">雁字横秋一绝笔 [梨花]</span> ---意境绝顶.对句难企</font></p><p>对局:梨花谢春满垄霜.[天堂]</p>
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<p>出句：<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;">雁字横秋一绝笔 [梨花]</span> 仄仄通平仄仄仄 （酌之，当臻至美）</font></p><p>对句：鸡书乱竹满村山[心语]<br/></p>
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梨花爱海棠</i>在2006-12-25 12:05:09的发言：</b><br/><p></p>哈。即是谢，霜不太好吧，银子可以。</div><p></p>此谢是春天谢幕之意
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>寻天</i>在2006-12-21 20:20:26的发言：</b><br/><p>出句：<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;;">雁字横秋一绝笔 [梨花]</span><br/> </font></p><p>对句：枫花返树万丹心 [寻天]</p></div><p></p><p>很不错。</p><p>返字改一下，如“染”等，是不是与出句的横一样形象。</p>
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>浅笑盈盈</i>在2006-12-22 10:49:10的发言：</b><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -21.25pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 21.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><font size="3">出句：</font></span></font></span></span><span style="COLOR: teal; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">雁字横秋一绝笔</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><font face="Times New Roman"> [</font></span><span style="COLOR: teal; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">梨花</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><font face="Times New Roman">]</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21.25pt; TEXT-INDENT: -21.25pt; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list 21.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><font face="Times New Roman">对句：</font></span><span style="COLOR: teal; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">游园惊梦两真情［盈盈］</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: teal;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p></div><p></p>哈。有故事。
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>天堂有鸟</i>在2006-12-22 16:48:26的发言：</b><br/><p>出句：<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;;">雁字横秋一绝笔 [梨花]</span> ---意境绝顶.对句难企</font></p><p>对局:梨花谢春满垄霜.[天堂]</p></div><p></p>哈。即是谢，霜不太好吧，银子可以。
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>心语飞香</i>在2006-12-23 9:01:15的发言：</b><br/><p>出句：<font size="3"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;;;">雁字横秋一绝笔 [梨花]</span> 仄仄通平仄仄仄 （酌之，当臻至美）</font></p><p>对句：鸡书乱竹满村山[心语]<br/></p></div><p></p><p>回心语：出句的确三仄尾，不过梨花不忌。</p><p>其实“一”与前面“雁字”、“横”都是有照应的。</p>
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