[原创] 五律 望雪
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:15 编辑<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">淡忘江城久？奈何三十年。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">雪刀藏已锈，裘服压成砖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>弗庵</i>在2006-12-14 21:06:58的发言：</b><br/><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">岭梅情眷眷，根在不能迁.</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">大好!</span></p></div><p></p> 多谢光临雅评，问好！
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梦落疏篱</i>在2006-12-14 21:57:14的发言：</b><br/>再拜读,尾联好意.问好:)</div><p></p> 谢谢！
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>霍山梦鹤</i>在2006-12-14 22:04:25的发言：</b><br/><p>是，结得好！</p></div><p></p> 谢鹤先生，多指点，问好！
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>山下诗人</i>在2006-12-14 22:23:19的发言：</b><br/>尾联确好，颔联对句略觉对的硬了些</div><p></p><p> 多谢山下兄直言指教，颔联弄了几次，也不满意。本来用下面两句，不知可否。盼教，，，，</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">雪刀还在等，貂氅未曾传</span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">岭梅情眷眷，根在不能迁.</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #666699; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">大好!</span></p>
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再拜读,尾联好意.问好:)
<p>是，结得好！</p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:15 编辑
尾联确好，颔联对句略觉对的硬了些
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