梅庐 发表于 2006-12-11 23:06:32

寄青岛王高密

<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><font face="宋体">往日贪秋忘了春，看花时节未能真。如今独享鹏城暖，聊以文章寄故人。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">12</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">日</span>

蓝天孤鹤 发表于 2006-12-11 23:51:53

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起承好味。

阿里邦 发表于 2006-12-12 01:25:13

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第三第四句过于随笔未出新意思,问好!

梅庐 发表于 2006-12-12 09:56:21

曾兄说的有理。昨日青岛王同学生日，无以酬寄，想大学数载一瞬而过，颇为感慨。山东已经很冷了，我在这里拾得几句权作生日礼物送她吧

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-12-12 21:47:29

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觉得意味正在结句.无寄而寄,正见情真.如贾宝玉之寄旧帕与林黛玉,非在物而在情.

梅庐 发表于 2006-12-12 22:52:41

友情是这样了。梦落后段说得玄乎了 ^_^

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-12-12 23:04:12

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呵呵,没有玄啦,个人看法是这样了.因为我自己也会常常和闺友互赠并不贵重的小礼物以示挂念.

老茶坊主 发表于 2006-12-13 09:11:48

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最喜结句

处州竹鸣 发表于 2006-12-13 09:18:00

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诗文寄真情。结句隽永！

云中化蝶 发表于 2006-12-13 11:26:20

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句滑了些，意却是又顺又好。

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