[原创]在三亚
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:34 编辑<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>在三亚<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 81pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体"></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体"></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">无边东海浪喧哗，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">椰梦长廊落晚霞。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">三角花红迎远客，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">金边瑞香在天涯。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">洲头学子生白发，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">西子湖边断桥斜。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">一片浮云寻细雨，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">依稀梦里又还家。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p><font face="宋体"> </font></p></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">说明：东海</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">椰梦长廊</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">天涯海角都是三亚的景点；三角花是三亚市花，金边瑞香是南昌市花；洲头学子指自己；断桥是指杭州西湖断桥，我旅行结婚时到过西湖。</span>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">小山 <span lang="EN-US">2006-9-4 19:12:13 <p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">诗人站在无边无垠的幽蓝的东海岸边，耳畔是层层海浪的喧哗，眼前成排的椰树绵延着伸向远方，好象一条长长的走廊，椰树的枝叶婆娑映着绯红的晚霞，如梦似幻，望着眼前的美丽景色，诗人想起在三亚市看到火红的三角梅，灿烂的笑靥有如在欢迎远方来的客人，这花又引起诗人对家乡南昌市花金边瑞香的怀想，那金边瑞香也是这般的娇艳，却远在天涯了。不由得感慨丛生，昔日的风华正茂的学子，如今头上也长出了白发，昔日与爱人蜜月同游，而如今却成了牛郎织女，日日望眼欲穿<span lang="EN-US">......</span>茫然的双眼追随着天边的浮云思绪也跟着飘向了远方的家乡，恍如梦中一般，又见到了亲人，心头滋生出如细雨般绵密的温柔情思。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"> 一二句写眼前实景，三四句写联想虚景，五六句由景入情抒发感慨，七八句则把情更推进一步，升华出文章主题。这是诗人大体的思路，只是一些地方还是不太明确，比如那些地名与作者的关系，作者的婚姻境况，没有详细介绍是不好理解的，只能凭着诗的内容作如上的推测。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>
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事物多，喜结
<p>喜尾联。</p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:34 编辑
也赏尾联:)
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