[原创]西子湖中照影来
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:36 编辑<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">西子湖中照影来<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; mso-char-indent-count: 4.0; tab-stops: 73.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="mso-tab-count: 1;"> </span><p></p></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">灵隐古刹禅寻尽，<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>九曲飞虹蛇影动，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">飞来峰顶客登台。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>三潭映月惊鸿哀。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">游侣莫道冬色冷，<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>淡抹浓妆吴宫泪，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">乡童迷离，<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>琼琳波碎，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">西子湖中照影来。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>浮光掠影费人猜？<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p><font face="宋体"> </font></p></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="宋体">说明：其实，这首诗有两条线，一条是写西湖的情景，另一条是写我的心路思索过程，也可两条线拢起来阅读。这种诗难读，却多了一层意思让人玩味。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><font face="宋体">注：<span lang="EN-US">1.</span>灵隐寺、飞来峰、九曲桥、三潭映月、琼琳飞波、都是杭州西湖景点。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">2.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">游侣：妻；乡童：我。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">3.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">蛇影动：一指水的波纹，二含白蛇传的传说。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">4.</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">惊鸿：旧时通常指年轻女子。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">5. </span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">淡抹浓妆吴宫泪：说的是西施入吴宫侍吴王夫差的故事</span>
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<p>意不错,词牌?</p><p>问好宜信:)</p>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:36 编辑
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">应该是古诗中的长短句吧。谢关注！</span>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:36 编辑
意境不错,缺少惊人佳句
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