西江月·读甘宝恩君《河外集》
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:41 编辑<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma;">西江月</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">·</span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma;">读甘宝恩君《河外集》</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p></p></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">曾向浪尖书画，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">又来河外歌吟。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">毕生难了治黄情，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">留下青春踪影。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">灵感自然流露，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">体裁新旧同行。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">紧跟时代最强音，</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">且把民生贴近。</span></p>
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好词。注意用韵严格：“吟”、“音”、“近”是一个系列；而“情”、“影”、“行”是另一个系列。
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>潇湘渔歌</i>在2006-11-18 8:42:19的发言：</b><br/>好词。注意用韵严格：“吟”、“音”、“近”是一个系列；而“情”、“影”、“行”是另一个系列。</div><p></p>谢谢,我普通话不太好,所以很少用这类韵作诗,但一般意义上讲,词韵较诗韵略宽,有别于平水韵,更加口语化一些.
意很到，的确如此。而为兄工作进展如何？我等是想念得很呢 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:42 编辑
弗庵兄诗品人品一流，敬佩！
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>蓝天孤鹤</i>在2006-11-18 16:31:56的发言：</b><br/>弗庵兄诗品人品一流，敬佩！</div><p>羞煞我也!</p><p>诗品汗颜,人品无愧,一流岂敢?</p><p>而为这首写我的让我照了一下镜子,还确是如此模样.</p><p>看来那本小册子他细翻了一遍.</p>
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也钦佩得很，问好先生
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读过河外集,斋主的一阕小词提炼的十分精彩.欣赏!
自愧不如：） 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 13:42 编辑
<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梅庐</i>在2006-11-18 11:38:56的发言：</b><br/>意很到，的确如此。而为兄工作进展如何？我等是想念得很呢</div><p></p>还是怎一个忙字了得.但现在每周上二次应不成问题.
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