[原创]天水关采风步杜工部《秋兴》八首
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:06 编辑<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">游览天水关</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>雨住风停鸟啭林,秦王庙宇树修森。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>迎门碑撰皇天颂,拙笔铭镌厚土阴。<font size="2">(注)</font></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>野菊应时涵淡露,平畴在望振雄心。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>芜词一束呈词长,快意乡关闻暮砧。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">注:重修秦王庙碑记,由邑人阎虎林先生撰,我曾奉命增删定稿。</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">天水关召开诗词学会年会</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>天水关前暮日斜,开坛依韵品文华。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>才情倚马驰幽径,学海征帆鼓远槎。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>顾盼楼台原石础,承传典籍共箫笳。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">瓢箪苦乐烟霞客,陋巷浮生问菊花。</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">一咏天水关三国古战场</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>登临天险访秋晖,槛外群峰笼翠微。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>西向涛声犹滚滚,南归燕影尚飞飞。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>三番问鼎谁三累?九伐兴师事九违。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">可叹风云多不测,从来逐鹿饱私肥。</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">二咏天水关三国古战场</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>取道崇山一赌棋,出师丞相甚堪悲?</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>鞠躬天水愁焦土,憔悴成都叹背时。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>骁将阵前身首异,贲军殿后羽旗驰。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">千秋霸业民酸楚,三国烽烟枉费思。</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">三咏天水关三国古战场</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>开疆远隔万重山,剑槊驰驱汉水间。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>战鼓奔雷惊战地,雄师披甲退雄关。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; 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mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">铁堂峡怀杜工部</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>行吟一路绕滩头,子美隆冬我暮秋。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>策蹇诗人衔古恨,寻根客侣惹穷愁。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>漫漫涧峡哀鸿鹄,缕缕山风惊鹭鸥。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">应料锦官花簇锦,飘蓬一梦过秦州。</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">天水关采风呈众词长</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong></strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>唐时伟绩宋时功,世代薪传感念中。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>汉水轻波萦曲岸,群贤皓首啸金风。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>关前踯躅彤云淡,霜后参差碧树红。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">吟遍山河人未老,裁来秋色赠诗翁。</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">天水关采风赠虎林君</span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="5"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>幽林虎啸声逶迤,年少才名震岭陂。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>藻咏结庐游目地,花开连理并头枝。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><font size="5"><strong>常怀义胆形相动,独步书山志未移。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">村野难留题柱客,丈夫豪逸自天垂。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><br/> </font></span></font></strong></p>
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<p>我来的及时,先坐沙发……</p>
步韵而不步意也,好久不见兄长,先问好 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:06 编辑
<p>久不见冰河兄,问好呢:)</p><p>一组好律,欣赏.万里客,三仄了~~</p>
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<p><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#000000">谢谢秋叶飘零、梅庐社长、特别是梦落疏篱版主!</font></strong></p><p><strong><font face="Verdana">万里客,不好意思啊,改为“题柱客”,何如?谢谢大家!</font></strong></p>
<p>游览天水关</p><p>雨住风停鸟啭林,秦王庙宇树修森。<br/>迎门碑撰皇天颂,拙笔铭镌厚土阴。(注)==“碑撰”覺不爽<br/>野菊应时涵淡露,平畴在望振雄心。<br/>芜词一束呈词长,快意乡关闻暮砧。===結得有古意,出句“一束”似太突出了:)<br/>注:重修秦王庙碑记,由邑人阎虎林先生撰,我曾奉命增删定稿。</p><p>天水关召开诗词学会年会</p><p>天水关前暮日斜,开坛依韵品文华。<br/>才情倚马驰幽径,学海征帆鼓远槎。--“倚马”?<br/>顾盼楼台原石础,承传典籍共箫笳。<br/>瓢箪苦乐烟霞客,陋巷浮生问菊花。---結得遠嫌</p><p>一咏天水关三国古战场</p><p>登临天险访秋晖,槛外群峰笼翠微。--“訪”字還可商量?<br/>西向涛声犹滚滚,南归燕影尚飞飞。--好<br/>三番问鼎谁三累?九伐兴师事九违。<br/>可叹风云多不测,从来逐鹿饱私肥。--感慨的是</p><p>其余待抽得深夜时间再品读</p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:07 编辑
谢谢社长!请继续抛砖。
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又遇天水才子,欣赏大作
<p>二咏天水关三国古战场</p><p>取道崇山一赌棋,出师丞相甚堪悲?<br/>鞠躬天水愁焦土,憔悴成都叹背时。--出身未捷,难免有此叹<br/>骁将阵前身首异,贲军殿后羽旗驰。<br/>千秋霸业民酸楚,三国烽烟枉费思。--兴旺,俱是百姓苦</p><p>三咏天水关三国古战场</p><p>开疆远隔万重山,剑槊驰驱汉水间。<br/>战鼓奔雷惊战地,雄师披甲退雄关。--退雄关?<br/>归田父子悲天命,黩武春秋认御颜。--“认御颜”也别扭嫌<br/>莫谓残阳徒抱恨,依然歌舞奏仙班。</p><p><br/>铁堂峡怀杜工部</p><p>行吟一路绕滩头,子美隆冬我暮秋。---出句“绕”字不妥,对句也觉得不爽<br/>策蹇诗人衔古恨,寻根客侣惹穷愁。--“诗人”“旅客”吧<br/>漫漫涧峡哀鸿鹄,缕缕山风惊鹭鸥。<br/>应料锦官花簇锦,飘蓬一梦过秦州。</p><p>天水关采风呈众词长</p><p>唐时伟绩宋时功,世代薪传感念中。<br/>汉水轻波萦曲岸,群贤皓首啸金风。<br/>关前踯躅彤云淡,霜后参差碧树红。<br/>吟遍山河人未老,裁来秋色赠诗翁。--潇洒</p><p>天水关采风赠虎林君</p><p>虎林一啸声逶迤,年少才名震岭陂。<br/>藻咏结庐游目地,花开连理并头枝。<br/>常怀义胆形相动,独步书山志未移。<br/>村野难留题柱客,丈夫豪逸自天垂。--觉结可酌</p>
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