云海 发表于 2006-11-17 09:05:47

<p>梅兄头像又换了,时装秀哈:)喜欢阳光的那个.</p><p></p><p></p>

孤砚生冰 发表于 2006-11-17 09:10:31

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">剪裁随意云中叶，拾得流光岁末诗。更取莲花山上景，一枝秋色寄相思。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">喜欢！</span></p>

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-17 11:05:44

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>云海陈岗</i>在2006-11-17 9:05:47的发言：</b><br/><p>梅兄头像又换了,时装秀哈:)喜欢阳光的那个.</p><p></p><p></p></div><p>沒有合適的，在外游玩時候照的，或者与朋友們的合影^_^</p>

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-17 11:13:58

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>孤砚生冰</i>在2006-11-17 9:10:31的发言：</b><br/><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">剪裁随意云中叶，拾得流光岁末诗。更取莲花山上景，一枝秋色寄相思。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">喜欢！</span></p></div><p>好久不見了，問好</p>

鄱湖渔歌 发表于 2006-11-17 11:25:53

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梅庐</i>在2006-11-16 1:53:19的发言：</b><br/>问好梅君。春吟兄指教結句“一枝秋色一相思”，似更蕴藉，以为如何？</div><p>甚佳</p>

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-17 11:32:29

<p>漁歌兄如此說了，一定要得的，改正 ：）</p>

艾诗人 发表于 2006-11-17 13:44:25

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">剪裁随意云中叶，拾得流光岁末诗</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 得灵动之美.欣赏学习了!</span></p>

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-17 21:25:35

艾兄好。这个写完斟酌了好久，为了交作业嘛 ：）

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-18 11:40:01

晕死，再看竟然出律…………

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-18 13:02:50

<p>修改一下如何：</p><p><font face="宋体" size="3">登莲花山约四支韵作</font></p><p><font size="3"><font face="宋体">饮茶时候登高约，灿烂花红意未迟。夕照骚人青石兴，清幽曲径百芳滋。<span lang="EN-US">
                                </span></font></font></p><p><font size="3"><font face="宋体">剪裁随意云中叶，拾得流光岁末诗。更取莲花山上景，一枝秋色一相思。<span lang="EN-US">
                                </span></font></font></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">14</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">日</span></p>
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