俏景 发表于 2006-11-11 18:38:22

七绝、秋日感

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<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p><p></p><font face="宋体"></font><br/><font face="楷体_GB2312"><font size="5"><font color="#800000">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 竹园已减三分翠,枫岭<span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">将凋</span></font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">万点红。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></font></font><p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;青帝若教吾作主,添些春色与东风。</span></font></p><p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span></font></p><p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span></font></p><p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span></font></p><p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span></font></p><p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: maroon; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-hansi-font-family;'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></font></p>
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梅庐 发表于 2006-11-11 19:39:04

<p>其一起的好句,结得平淡</p><p>其二有妙用,似立意不新奇矣</p><p>俏景先生,久违了:) 问好</p>

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-11-11 22:50:56

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">想起古人两句:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">----晴空一鹤排云上,便引诗情到碧霄</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">----他年我若为青帝,报与桃花一处开</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">可见诗心无今古.问好~~~~~~~~~~~~~</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"></span></p>

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