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晋风发表于 2006-11-10 09:38:40

[原创]秋韵几首

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">                         秋晚</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">群雁南飞万里空，寒山野草夕阳中。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">谁家黄犬村边叫，唤起炊烟望钓翁。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">                          </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">秋晨</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">晨起枫林晓雾中，满山红叶露珠浓。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">谁人岭上情歌唱，醉了溪边几棵松。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 131.25pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 秋思</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">托雁南飞捎信去，相思一片到东江。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">问哥何日家乡返？小妹祈望早结双</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 131.25pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">秋词</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">一夜风来叶满池，月光清冷五更时。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">菊花傲笑谁如我？敢与寒霜斗赋诗。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 132pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0; mso-char-indent-size: 22.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">秋问</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">又是一年霜降日，给儿寄去御寒衣。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">打工受苦娘牵挂，梦问三餐是否饥？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 131.25pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">秋叹</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">寒棚工仔咽白菜，酒店官家吃鲍鱼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">谁问贫民饥与饱？常闻报纸道赢余。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 131.25pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">秋憾</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">植树年年完任务，试看山上几多株？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman";">沙尘黄土随风起，业绩遮天绿却无。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 142.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p>

弗庵发表于 2006-11-10 11:48:30

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的面讽的好

蓝天孤鹤 发表于 2006-11-10 13:14:38

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<p>好诗情！学习。</p>

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-11-10 21:18:48

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最赏秋叹和秋憾.问好~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

梅庐发表于 2006-11-11 14:27:58

推秋叹，写的很有意义

山下诗人 发表于 2006-11-11 17:13:18

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几首差别较大，有些还当斟酌

天天快乐 发表于 2006-11-12 10:46:25

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也欣赏后三首,时事诗声.

苏莱曼 发表于 2006-11-12 20:29:38

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: ';">寒棚工仔咽白菜，酒店官家吃鲍鱼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;">
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: ';">谁问贫民饥与饱？常闻报纸道赢余。</span></p>

景秀发表于 2006-11-12 21:23:50

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<p><font face="华文新魏" color="#ff0000" size="6">业绩遮天绿却无。一语中的．</font></p><p><font face="华文新魏" color="#ff0000" size="6">后三手联系实际，且有新意，应鼓励这样的创作．</font></p><p><font face="华文新魏" color="#ff0000" size="6">推．</font></p>

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