处州竹鸣 发表于 2006-11-9 09:51:10

浣溪纱·游古堰画乡

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<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 103.5pt;"><font size="3"><font face="宋体"><span style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">古树</span><span style="mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;">参天掩小亭</span></font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">&nbsp;</span><font face="宋体"><span style="mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;">。一江碧水数峰青。两三舴艋</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p style="TEXT-INDENT: 72pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0; mso-char-indent-size: 12.0pt;"><font size="3"><span style="mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体">渚边横。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><font face="宋体"><span style="mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;">隔岸茅飞添画韵，沿渠波漾润秋声。品</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;茶观景</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">寄闲情</font>。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-9 09:55:06

上阙井然有序的景致，让人向往，真乃画乡也。下阙也悠然，“润”字不甚喜欢，结句平静 ：）

墨黑 发表于 2006-11-9 10:36:03

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<p>一江碧水数峰青。两三舴艋<font size="3"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><font face="宋体">渚边横。</font></span></font></p><p><font size="3"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">见情趣。</span></font></p>

天堂有鸟 发表于 2006-11-9 10:41:53

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<p>颇有意境.</p><p><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial;"><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial;">隔岸茅飞添画韵，沿渠波涌润秋声==</span>隔岸茅棚添画韵，沿渠清波润秋声</span></p>

烟雨客 发表于 2006-11-9 11:24:55

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喜上阙

山下诗人 发表于 2006-11-9 23:55:57

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恬淡颇有情趣

处州竹鸣 发表于 2006-11-10 09:43:02

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<p>谢谢诸位诗友雅赏、指教！</p><p>茅飞——指茅花飞舞。</p><p>波涌——改为波漾。</p>

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