金嗣水 发表于 2006-11-7 15:32:32

沁园春·赠友人张继建君

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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">2006年11月</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">洗净乾坤，水碧天蓝，国策惠施。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">念千秋伟业，儿孙福祉；一肩重任，朋辈相期。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">黄鸟枯林，青骢槽厩，窗外常闻夜半鸡。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">千斤担，叹冯唐易老，点将何时？</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">贤才难得深知，不余力、逢人说项斯。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">是识珠慧眼，举贤伯乐；良材竞用，堪定鸿基。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">海阔扬帆，天高展翅，骏马长川自奋蹄。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">开新境，看龙山滴翠，皖水涟漪。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p>

梅庐 发表于 2006-11-7 15:45:30

喜两结

潇湘渔歌 发表于 2006-11-7 16:39:45

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拜读。论述性的语言多了点，因而影响了形象的塑造。

天堂有鸟 发表于 2006-11-7 17:09:30

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<p>大气呵成,</p><p>淋漓畅快.</p><p></p>

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-11-7 21:15:41

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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-ansi-language:zh-cn;;">海阔扬帆，天高展翅，骏马长川自奋蹄。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-ansi-language:zh-cn;;">
                        <p>!</p></span></p><p>!</p>

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