秋尽八首(其五,其六)
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:47 编辑<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">其五<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">悲欢穷达本无谋<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>不问官场封几侯<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">常写拙诗平仄句<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>最怜老酒二锅头<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">牧羊卜式曾名贵<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>烧烛石崇唯耻羞<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">笑见飞蓬黄白色<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>昏昏欲坠大河流<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">其六<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">故园非是旧田庐<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>南亩秋耕背影疏<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">耆旧几扶阡陌树<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>子孙多读圣贤书<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">聊斋故事门无雪<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>五柳新醅食有鱼<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">何日归乡秋客道<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>相逢长话忆当初<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">常写拙诗平仄句<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>最怜老酒二锅头 这个畅意啊 ^_^</span></p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:47 编辑
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">耆旧几扶阡陌树<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>子孙多读圣贤书<span lang="EN-US">
<p>文化接力棒长传不衰,先生有功哦:)</p></span></span></p><p>文化接力棒长传不衰,先生有功哦:)</p>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:47 编辑
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_mso-hansi-font-family:仿宋_;">聊斋故事门无雪<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span>五柳新醅食有鱼<span lang="EN-US">
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本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:47 编辑
五豁达,六多情
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:47 编辑
<p>本不喜用典,更反对用僻典.</p><p>这两首用了六个典,虽不为僻,亦嫌堆砌,病矣.</p>
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:47 编辑
其五虽是现实心境,但油滑嫌.
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