鹏城数日阴霾，上班途中择韵寄怀山东
<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p><font size="5"><font face="宋体"><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">鹏城数日阴霾，上班途中择韵寄怀山东<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">窗外红黄地，如今颜色穷。鸟藏云瑟瑟，叶落气懵懵。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">酒寄清风洞，花移明月宫。江山有无雪，择日到山东。<span lang="EN-US">
<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">3</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">日</span></p></font></font>
<p>再添上一个</p><font size="5"><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">酬浪舞天涯社区浪子杨兄兼示茗世兄<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">明灯晓花静，夜色相与邻。茶冷多心事，梦寒费精神。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">幸交湘境客，喜见粤间人。虽在秋窗里，还能扫细尘。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2006</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">11</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">2</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">日</span></p></font> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:42 编辑
另发的好？
呵呵，可以，还请多批评 ：） 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:42 编辑
<p>第一首更好，清风洞，明月宫，实有其地吗？</p>
地上天上，是有的，写的鬼气了点？呵呵 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:42 编辑
<p>江山有无雪，择日到山东----十分欣赏这样结,似有无穷之意.</p><p> 清风洞,明月宫,西游记里面找到,好的东西被妖精收走了吧.</p><p> </p>
<p>呵呵，还是艾兄体察我心</p><p>西游记，不错的 ：）</p> <p>这个我应弗庵兄、景秀兄嘱，修改了下，诸位再批：</p><p>窗外红黄地，如今颜色穷。鸟藏风瑟瑟，日隐气懵懵。<br/>茶水无滋味，前程多树丛。家山有无雪，择日到山东。</p> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 14:42 编辑
<p>拜读梅庐社长五律二首，喜，自我感觉更喜二。</p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">明灯晓花静，夜色相与邻。茶冷多心事，梦寒费精神。<span lang="EN-US">
<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">幸交湘境客，喜见粤间人。虽在秋窗里，还能扫细尘。<span lang="EN-US">
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