调笑令·秋月
本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 15:01 编辑<p><font face="宋体"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font size="3"> </font></span></span></font><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;">调笑令·秋月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoPlainText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 34.5pt;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="宋体"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></font></span></font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">秋月，秋月，不道离人愁绝。姗姗夜半临窗，</span></p><p class="MsoPlainText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 34.5pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">似说银河路长。长路，长路，晓起一天浓雾！</span></p>
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<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-ascii-font-family:'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">好词,欣赏 秋月，秋月，不道离人愁绝</span>
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<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#da2549">佩服潇湘的词！</font></strong>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-ascii-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg";">哈哈，临屏也来吹一箫，配配调。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong><font color="#0000ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-ascii-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg";">风月，风月，慢道何时堪绝。风来雅聚幽香，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p></p></span></font></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong><font color="#0000ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-ascii-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg";">月照离绪短长。长短，长短，多少秋凉夏暖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p></p></span></font></strong></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p><strong><font color="#0000ff"> </font></strong></p></span></p>
前面好，下面似乎未能出词牌味 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 15:01 编辑
<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梅若雪</i>在2006-11-4 10:40:30的发言：</b><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-ascii-font-family:'mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;;">好词,欣赏 秋月，秋月，不道离人愁绝</span></div><p>谢谢梅子！你的词来得那么快，和上一首吧。</p>
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>蓝天孤鹤</i>在2006-11-4 12:03:43的发言：</b><br/><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#da2549">佩服潇湘的词！</font></strong></div><p>谢谢蓝天版主阅评！</p>
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>千山风</i>在2006-11-4 14:32:37的发言：</b><br/><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-ascii-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg";">哈哈，临屏也来吹一箫，配配调。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong><font color="#0000ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-ascii-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg";">风月，风月，慢道何时堪绝。风来雅聚幽香，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p></p></span></font></strong></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><strong><font color="#0000ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-ascii-font-family: "MS Shell Dlg";">月照离绪短长。长短，长短，多少秋凉夏暖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p></p></span></font></strong></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "MS Shell Dlg"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><p><strong><font color="#0000ff"> </font></strong></p></span></p><p><strong><font color="#0000ff"> </font></strong></p><p></p></div><p>千山风兄好和！结句回味无穷，尤堪击节而赏之也。问好！</p>
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<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>梅庐</i>在2006-11-4 14:56:06的发言：</b><br/>前面好，下面似乎未能出词牌味</div><p> 谢社长雅评。这首词是将秋月拟人化了。晚上不眠，秋月姗姗来迟。念及远人，不免情有所寄——“银河”之隔，远则远矣，似乎还有路，可是清早起来一看，这满天的大雾，上哪儿去找路呀！不免又生出许多愁烦来。不妥之处，容再斟酌。再谢！</p>
明白先生的意思，我记得此调多深出浅入，我再琢磨^_^
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