无一字秋怨[旧]
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<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">1.</FONT>接到最后的通牒</P>
<P>残阳浴血染枫林<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>一叶蝉鸣万籁森<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>酒里千回浇块磊<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>烟中百度杳光阴<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P>编箕空有移山志<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>画舫难为泛海心<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>困惑秋凉江上水<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>无端浪拍捣衣砧<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">2.</FONT>分别之前的晚上</P>
<P>落叶翻飞片片斜<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>秋风铺垫感春华<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>丁年锈烂屠龙剑<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>子夜沉吟覆海槎<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P>易把金樽醅汉水<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>难将玉帛赎胡笳<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>凌晨不忍疏荷露<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>无语栏前滴泪花<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">3.</FONT>车站绝别的情景</P>
<P>吐雾吞云送落晖<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>沈园故事此人微<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>心如衙外千蜂螫<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>身似楼头一雁飞<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P>乡语当初欢汝拗<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>虞歌者日哭君违<FONT face="Times New Roman">!</FONT>从今敧枕黄花坞<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>无意黄花瘦与肥<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">4.</FONT>回乡所结的疑团</P>
<P>休书弃画绝琴棋<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>把盏闻蛩院落悲<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>问怨深深深几许<FONT face="Times New Roman">?</FONT>酌情错错错何时<FONT face="Times New Roman">?</FONT></P>
<P>洞庭南北烟云绕<FONT face="Times New Roman">?</FONT>珠水西东岁月驰<FONT face="Times New Roman">?</FONT>啖枣蒸藜难合意<FONT face="Times New Roman">?</FONT>无眠冷夜费猜思<FONT face="Times New Roman">!</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">5.</FONT>早就知道的结果</P>
<P>极目天边叠叠山<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>已知黄鹤白云间<FONT face="Times New Roman">!</FONT>题愁磨秃三千管<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>书愤冲开百二关<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P>未许冰人寻黛色<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>偏从酒阁借酡颜<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>西风检点飘零叶<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>一地相思染发班<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">6.</FONT>无梦有酒的日子</P>
<P>今日吴头是楚头<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>伤怀宋玉辨霜秋<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>心翻竹海千重浪<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>意撞编钟万古愁<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P>肠胃超支杯里酒<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>雨风弄散水中鸥<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>堪怜无处黄粱借<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>一梦随州赴广州<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">7.</FONT>当初相识的回忆</P>
<P>莫道清秋造化功<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>桂芳难入梦魂中<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>天公不解云追月<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>齐妇何知雨伴风<FONT face="Times New Roman">?</FONT></P>
<P>湘渚三更凝露白<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>江城五月落梅红<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>思潮滚滚之前事<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>一片伤心共放翁<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">8.</FONT>整整四年的感喟</P>
<P>四年经历路逶迤<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>风带寒霜降竹陂<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>难阻吴歌飞北国<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>唯祈越鸟宿南枝<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>
<P>人间万象随星动<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>盏里三秋被月移<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT>再唱刀郎名曲日<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>一场大雪九天垂<FONT face="Times New Roman">!</FONT></P>
<P>后语：芳子与阿龙九八年五月相识于武汉，芳子是湖北随州<FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>出土编钟<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>人，阿龙是潇湘益阳<FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>有名胜竹海景点<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>人。因阿龙父母一直反对，她们辗转于武汉，长沙，广州，顺德及阿龙乡下，芳子不善烹饪，不善言辞。未得其母所爱。四年后<FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>零二年<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>，阿龙雕塑业务低峰期<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>双方绝别于长沙！<o:p></o:p></P>
<P>从今敧枕黄花坞<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>无意黄花瘦与肥<FONT face="Times New Roman">. ：）</FONT></P>
<P>再唱刀郎名曲日<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>一场大雪九天垂<FONT face="Times New Roman">! ：））</FONT></P> 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 17:28 编辑
<P>凄婉至极。</P>
<P>次杜甫秋兴八首韵，更见哀伤，令人不忍卒读！</P>
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<P>一组精致的好律,情节连贯,一气呵成,不是自述吧?</P>
<P>推~~~~~~~~~~</P>
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<P>欣赏</P>
<P>上美酒!!!!!</P>
有笔力 本帖最后由 樱林花主 于 2015-10-6 17:28 编辑
真好手笔，用老杜韵写一段凄绝的故事，不简单。精华。
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<P>荒漠兄，小弟在科技园这边。。工作原因，今年写的少了。。</P>
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翻新出意趣,欣赏学习.
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