杜若 发表于 2006-8-18 20:04:45

【七律】秋日感怀

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<H1 align=center><FONT color=#e6421a>【七律】秋日感怀――长空又送雁飞南（辘轳体）</FONT><O:P></O:P></H1>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: 9.0; mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: 144.55pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0pt;>一<STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>长空又送雁飞南，落叶黄花酒半酣</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;>树色萧条才过半，钟声凄楚又叠三<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;>曾伤霜下奈何冷，空恨此身不若男<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;>江海纵横如一梦，暂凭薄醉谢吾惭<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 16.0pt; 8.0; 128pt;>二<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;><FONT face="Times New Roman"></FONT>放眼秋山亦有惭，<STRONG>长空又送雁飞南</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>检书不见报国策，对月空沉词笔酣</STRONG><O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;>夜雨敲窗千更万，寒霜惊醒再而三<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;>忧心天下风云事，谁道女儿不若男？<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 16.0pt; 6.0; 96pt;>三（秋日看影片《远东特谴队》有感）<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 16.0pt; 48pt;>烽烟烈火好儿男，青史留名无可惭<O:P></O:P></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>孤胆常惊贼落寇，长空又送雁飞南</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>气吞山海节如铁，勇破豺狼战犹酣</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>银幕虽能临往事，不及其境两三三</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 7.0; 112.45pt;><STRONG>四</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
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<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>梅花雪上香终浅，杨柳渡头泪渐惭</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>笔墨才书秋恨水，长空又送雁飞南</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>谁人能解诗中意？空自轻愁梦不酣</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 7.0; 112.45pt;><STRONG>五</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>新秋赏菊意犹酣，好酒盈盈一再三</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>舒卷压霜花样女，阑珊酌月玉颜男</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>渊明逸兴杯中趣，子美诗情笔下惭</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>
<P align=left 0cm none? mso-layout-grid-align: 16.05pt; mso-char-indent-size: mso-char-indent-count: left; TEXT-ALIGN: TEXT-INDENT: 0pt; 3.0; 48.2pt;><STRONG>空瘦冷香君子顾，长空又送雁飞南</STRONG><STRONG><O:P></O:P></STRONG></P>

石竹 发表于 2006-8-18 20:17:42

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<P>大家才女风范．令须眉汗颜．</P>
<P>致敬：</P>

霍山梦鹤 发表于 2006-8-18 20:31:53

见形见情见景见意，佳句佳联颇多，欣赏。

杜若 发表于 2006-8-18 21:02:39

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谢谢石竹兄和别鹤兄.凑趣助兴也.

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-8-19 00:05:43

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欣赏杜若MM的好律，女儿情致，动人~~~~~~~~~~~~`

黄阳山人 发表于 2006-8-19 00:12:40

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好诗欣赏了。

俏景 发表于 2006-8-19 11:58:14

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好久不见若,问好,好诗欣赏.

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